FIC: The First Time
- Title: The First Time
Author: Rachel Martin
Pairing: Scott/Jubilee, Warren, Ororo
Summary: The first times before the first time.
The first time she saw the "Jubilation" line in Macy's she thought
her heart just might burst right out of her chest. Her designs. Her
name on the label. Her line of pre-teen clothes, for sale in a major
Note: I've moved my WIP "Player on the Other Side" to this journal,
and have deleted it from Geocities.com and FanFiction.net
- I loved this! All the characters - even the ones you
just sketch briefly - are drawn so convincingly.
Oh, one minor typo you might want to fix:
"She knew would be no Jubilation, Inc. at all without
his financial backing and social patronage."
I think you're missing the word "there" in there.
And isn't Pratt in Brooklyn?
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- Thanks for letting me know about the typo, I'll fix that.
Pratt has 2 locations:
200 Willoughby Ave.
144 West 14th Street
Pratt is located between Sixth and Seventh Avenues on the south side of the
block, closest to Seventh Avenue.
And I realize now I was really thinking of the Fashion Institute of
Technology, LOL! I�ve been away from home too long. I�ll probably go back
and change it in the story
Fashion Institute of Technology
Seventh Avenue at 27 Street
New York City 10001-5992
Glad you liked it, thanks for the kind words.
>From: Mo <mogbrg@...>
>Subject: Re: [xmmff] FIC: The First Time
>Date: Tue, 25 Apr 2006 03:38:21 -0700 (PDT)
>I loved this! All the characters - even the ones you
>just sketch briefly - are drawn so convincingly.
>Oh, one minor typo you might want to fix:
>"She knew would be no Jubilation, Inc. at all without
>his financial backing and social patronage."
>I think you're missing the word "there" in there.
>And isn't Pratt in Brooklyn?
>Mofic Website: http://mo.fandomnation.com/fic/
>Do You Yahoo!?
>Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around