Disclaimer : First off I ve subscribed to many mailing lists and i feel too
lazy to sort
through them and figure out which story is from which so if u're from
mailing list and havent heard of a story i just feedbacked it's likely
another list. Second I am a scott-jean fan so u'll definatly see whole
prejiduce in their favour. Third i have little talent at critique and
experiance at feedbacking so some of my feedback may seem a bit skimpy,
apologies in advance.
1- Shattered Dreams By: Yann : The author may remember that me from a
feedback earlier halfway
through the story, It definatlly did not end the way i thought
Very cool fic, my eyes nearly popped out when i frst read Zoe
stating her relationship to Scott. May be you could write one
set in the past really exploring their relationship?
2- Forgotten Christmas By scentofnightjasmine: Good fic, explores the s/j
well. Good work.
3- The Best Christmas Ever & 1 year later By Becky: Didn't really go in to
of S/J and a bit smutty but I Like Smutt So I like
these fics, how about one set
five years from now?
4- Twists of Fate By Khylea: Now this was a really really great fic. Jean's
feellings and past were very much gone into and explored. Hope to see
more of the
same quality & type. Maybe one of Scott's feelings?
5- Beneath the Floor Boards & Please Get Well By L.Burke: Beneath the
floorbords was a great
fic. Slims relationships to each of the xmen was
very well shown(I'm also glad you remembered
Kitty). Hope to see what logan's present was and
may u could bring him back at the same time?
Please get well was humous. I especially like the
line about the snow woman in scott's bed. Hope to
see sequal soon.
6- Undying Love By Michael O'Leary: Very good fic. I really hope he does
come back, You left a
good opening with Sinister in the end, so do u intend some
sort of sequal?
Well that's all for now, more fics = more feedback