6314Re: [xmmff] FIC: The First Time
- Apr 25, 2006Thanks for letting me know about the typo, I'll fix that.
Pratt has 2 locations:
200 Willoughby Ave.
144 West 14th Street
Pratt is located between Sixth and Seventh Avenues on the south side of the
block, closest to Seventh Avenue.
And I realize now I was really thinking of the Fashion Institute of
Technology, LOL! I�ve been away from home too long. I�ll probably go back
and change it in the story
Fashion Institute of Technology
Seventh Avenue at 27 Street
New York City 10001-5992
Glad you liked it, thanks for the kind words.
>From: Mo <mogbrg@...>
>Subject: Re: [xmmff] FIC: The First Time
>Date: Tue, 25 Apr 2006 03:38:21 -0700 (PDT)
>I loved this! All the characters - even the ones you
>just sketch briefly - are drawn so convincingly.
>Oh, one minor typo you might want to fix:
>"She knew would be no Jubilation, Inc. at all without
>his financial backing and social patronage."
>I think you're missing the word "there" in there.
>And isn't Pratt in Brooklyn?
>Mofic Website: http://mo.fandomnation.com/fic/
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