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Re: Poem> "Demonizing Phantom"

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  • jvr36
    Absolutely wonderful. Can I save this as a future reference? It was kind of entrancing. Love it. ... me. ... stand.
    Message 1 of 2 , Mar 3, 2007
      Absolutely wonderful. Can I save this as a future reference? It was
      kind of entrancing. Love it.

      --- In writers_unblock@yahoogroups.com, "Samantha"
      <samantha_saines@...> wrote:
      >
      > I felt the fallen angel speak through me
      > and use my body to his beckon call.
      > His pleasure was to seek my sins
      > and burn them upon my once innocent eyes.
      > He claimed to be my saving grace;
      > that tempting hand to grasp when falling below
      > and how much now, I rather would have fallen.
      >
      > He moved my lips to his delight
      > and through me spoke words of deceit,
      > clouding my mind, my intuitions and my puppeteering gestures.
      > I looked in the mirror only to see half of him plastered on half of
      me.
      > And the scent of a traitor was a greater stench than I could ever
      stand.
      >
      > My shallow eyes roll back into my head
      > as my brain can no longer withstand normal function
      > and every nuiance of this spell
      > is making me a servant to my fears.
      > This clock is moving all the more faster
      > and I cannot fathom how long this second took to pass.
      >
      > My mortal tranquility cannot return
      > lest I turn my back to his silky whispers and crimson pupils.
      > They dilate with each fierce pumping of a weak heart
      > any moment collapsing into the black hole of eternity.
      > One last breath to take,
      > one last vision of mercy
      > before I overtake my monster.
      >
    • Samantha
      Why thank you! Glad you loved it! ... of
      Message 2 of 2 , Mar 11, 2007
        Why thank you! Glad you loved it!

        --- In writers_unblock@yahoogroups.com, "jvr36" <jvr36@...> wrote:
        >
        > Absolutely wonderful. Can I save this as a future reference? It was
        > kind of entrancing. Love it.
        >
        > --- In writers_unblock@yahoogroups.com, "Samantha"
        > <samantha_saines@> wrote:
        > >
        > > I felt the fallen angel speak through me
        > > and use my body to his beckon call.
        > > His pleasure was to seek my sins
        > > and burn them upon my once innocent eyes.
        > > He claimed to be my saving grace;
        > > that tempting hand to grasp when falling below
        > > and how much now, I rather would have fallen.
        > >
        > > He moved my lips to his delight
        > > and through me spoke words of deceit,
        > > clouding my mind, my intuitions and my puppeteering gestures.
        > > I looked in the mirror only to see half of him plastered on half
        of
        > me.
        > > And the scent of a traitor was a greater stench than I could ever
        > stand.
        > >
        > > My shallow eyes roll back into my head
        > > as my brain can no longer withstand normal function
        > > and every nuiance of this spell
        > > is making me a servant to my fears.
        > > This clock is moving all the more faster
        > > and I cannot fathom how long this second took to pass.
        > >
        > > My mortal tranquility cannot return
        > > lest I turn my back to his silky whispers and crimson pupils.
        > > They dilate with each fierce pumping of a weak heart
        > > any moment collapsing into the black hole of eternity.
        > > One last breath to take,
        > > one last vision of mercy
        > > before I overtake my monster.
        > >
        >
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