193Re: Poem> "Iridescence"
- Jul 17, 2006Iridescence was one of my many poems that begins as a brain game for
me on how well I can play with words. Sometimes they end up coming
out meaningful or meaningful to a certain individual specifically.
Sometimes they don't make sense at all. If anyone feels a vibe with
this, feel free to let me know. I am always interested in clever
responses (not meant to be sarcastic) people give me for them of how
they think it can be interpreted, if anything at all. Every now and
again someone will come up with something good that sounds really
deep and is fun to think about (lol).
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "Samantha"
> I see you as though iridescently
> My soul could reach through rainbow reflected light shadows
> Cast on the sparks in my eyes
> Of brilliance, of dullness
> Changing rapidly with the hiding of the sun
> Light and swallowed into my stream
> Of consciousness being elongated to the sound of each of these
> Written across volumes of emotion-full scrolls
> Secluded in sacred walls
> Portraying a story of a once man
> Made to tell me a song
> Sung in high pitch
> radiating our private irridescence.
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