Need Beta for PG-13 McShep Slash
- John-centric, slight AU - characters and setting are canon, it just
so happens there's a situation which will obviously not happen in
canon due to the fact that slash itself isn't exactly canon, so
you'll have to bear with me. Slight spoilers for Tao of Rodney...
It's a short two-parter [each part is around 4000 words long.] The
first part is ready for beta, the second part is in it's first draft
but should be ready by tomorrow night. I'm hoping to get the thing
finished by Wednesday the 3rd, as I start classes again then and I
won't have a lot of time, and I can imagine most people's winter
breaks are coming to a close as well.
I've already fleshed it out some from the first draft, and it's
doubled in length just by that. However, I'd like a thorough beta -
grammar and spelling, [although as a side note, I am Canadian, and
my 'ou's will stay 'ou's, and if 'centre' pops up in there, that's
correct, too] as well as any ideas for maybe giving the story more
I think this fic has potential, but I know there's something missing
from it. It feels very run of the mill to me, and I know it has to do
with Sheppard's character; I want to explore that, and develop it a
I'm used to writing NC-17[I am of age for my region - if you're
curious, i' 19], but I decided to skip the sex with this fic, and
focus on the character in question, so it's a bit of a challenge for
as well, it's untitled except for a terribly cliche working title
which i refuse to disclose here for embarrasment's sake, lol.
If someone's willing to help me out with this, I'd really appreciate
it. Get out the red text, please! lol.
I can be contacted by the following means:
if I can't be reached by one of those methods, then another of them
will surely work.
Thanks in advance to anyone who decides to take this on, I appreciate
it. I hope this is enough information...