I'm looking for someone to beta a 3/4 possiblely 5 part story (it may
end up with two endings)
It's a rodney mpreg, which may end up McShep or McMichtell (hence the
two endings.) It's slightly angsty but hopefully with a happy ending(s).
I've only written the first 3 parts but i was hoping someone will be
willing to go over what i've written. i'm not the best speller and
it's my second attempt at writing a SGA story so if anything is out of
character i'm happy for any suggestions.
- Hey people!If someone is willing, I would like some help with a fic I've been working on. To be blunt, I need someone to tell me if it's any good or not -- and therefore, if I should continue to write it or not. Right now, the story is about 3600 words, with a prologue and the first chapter. Obviously, it is a WIP and I have no idea when I'm going to be able to finish. Of course, if you can also check grammar mistakes and such, I'll be very grateful.The rating of the story is currently FRT/PG-13. It will be slash eventually (though I'd say that the written parts are very much gen), and it is centered around an OMC.On a final note; please, I need someone that will really tell me if it is worth to continue the story or not. So, if it isn't good, I want someone who can thrash it. Really.Thanks,ShaMak
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- Hiya, I'm Hannah and I'm willing to beta for you. If you send it to
my email: blue_mystery@..., then I will be very happy to
look it over for you.
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, ShaMak <shamakff@...> wrote:
> Hey people!
> If someone is willing, I would like some help with a fic I've been
working on. To be blunt, I need someone to tell me if it's any good
or not -- and therefore, if I should continue to write it or not.
Right now, the story is about 3600 words, with a prologue and the
first chapter. Obviously, it is a WIP and I have no idea when I'm
going to be able to finish. Of course, if you can also check grammar
mistakes and such, I'll be very grateful.
> The rating of the story is currently FRT/PG-13. It will be slash
eventually (though I'd say that the written parts are very much gen),
and it is centered around an OMC.
> On a final note; please, I need someone that will really tell me if
it is worth to continue the story or not. So, if it isn't good, I
want someone who can thrash it. Really.
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- Hi folks!
I could use a beta reader for a McShep slash, post Tao of Rodney fic.
It's 1500 words. And kinda schmoopy. I basically just want a
read-through to catch any grammar/spelling errors and any thoughts you
have like 'dude, this is so out of character, try this instead' and
whatnot. I don't have Word, but I do have WordPad and Notepad.
This isn't my first fic, and I usually just go by the seat of my pants
and go unbeta'd, but there's this thing, and it's called 'patience', I
guess I should try to learn that, lol.
Also, I'd like someone who is open to working with me in the future. I
only write fics every few months at the most, but I think a go-to
fresh pair of eyes would be wicked beneficial. And randomly, I'm
working on a McShep AU where zombies exist. So liking violence? A
probable plus. And I don't usually go into NC-17 sexin. So as the Bush
song goes, there's no sex in my violence. *cough*
I'm going to quit rambling now.
Thanks for your time.
Having given up on having finishing the longer story I'm writing anytime soon, I've written a short 2,000 or so word J/R stroy.Is anyone around for general read through/ encouragement/ advise?My first finished story (Ever!) and would like to get feedback soon so I don't lose the goldern glow of creativity.Email me at madmandy1@... and I'll send it over.ThanksAmanda
- I am in need of a beta for a Rodney-centric fic.
I'm in need of someone who can give me plot and characterization analysis and not grammar and
punctuation (although, if such errors are found, it's always appreciated if they're pointed out).
Length-wise, the story I'm writing is going to be in the ballpark of 25000 words, with 40
parts - each about 6250 words.
It's going to be set post-"Tao of Rodney", though some mention of "Sunday" will be made in
regards to Carson's character. (And "The Game" *might* be mentioned, but in an off-hand, general
conversation sort of way.) The pairings are going to be Rodney/John (in a
just-starting-to-get-into-a-relationship way), Rodney/OFC, Rodney/Chuck/Lorne and John/Carson.
The rating will be NC-17.
The basic idea of the story is that Rodney is stranded on another planet and goes native.
The majority of the first half of the fic deals with this (with a few parts focusing on the
"Meanwhile, back in Atlantis...") He ends up staying there for about 3 & 1/3 years and makes a
new life for himself there before people from Atlantis are able to make it back, with help from a
mutual trade relation. Once back, Rodney has trouble reacclimating himself to Atlantis and feels
himself stuck between two worlds. Then, he gets a plea for help from his adopted world and feels
compelled to go back and help them, taking back-up with him (as well as a means to get home this
If anyone's interested, I can give more in-depth information.
And I'm planning on having the first part done by the end of next Wednesday.
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- Hiya =)
In need of a beta for a slash piece pairing: Lorne/Ronon, R
It's an AU take off of S4 episode of Last Man Standing. The word count is: 3049 No major rush but I'd like to post a beta'd version before the new year.
Strong points needed: grammar, tenses, and commas.
If you're interested please contact me here or email me privately at: denyce36 at yahoo.com
Thanks in advance!!