My usual beta is unavailable, so I'm looking for someone to beta my
latest fic. It's a Harlequin AU, currently at 55,000 words (I should
be done by the end of the week, probably around 65,000 words), with
all of the usual Harlequin cliches: miscommunication, copious amounts
of wild sex, evil ex-boyfriends, miscommunication, kidnappings and, oh
yes, poor communication.
The grammar and flow shouldn't be problem areas, and I'm happy with
the plot and most of the characterizations. However, Rodney is
presenting a problem (which is unusual for me) and I would greatly
appreciate suggestions on how to give his character a bit more spark.
Thanks in advance for your consideration!