Need Beta for Gen Action/Adventure Story with possibly violent scenes.
I just finished my first story on Wraithbait ("Clone 'Verse"), and
need a beta for the sequel.
i don't have much problems with spelling or grammar (that's what the
spell checker exists for :-) ), but as a not-american i could use
input on local color - foods, brands of candy or coffee etc.
someone with interest in the M*A*S*H tv-series would be especially
appreciated as a tiny semi-crossover exists.
thank you in advance,
nim the cat