It's kinda kinky, 4,600 words. BDSM theme but nothing heavy at all,
IMO. (Orgasm denial/delay and slight domination) Male masturbation and
semi-public sex also included.
Mostly just seeking grammar / logistics check and if someone familiar with
the above bdsm aspects would be willing to have a look as well, I'd be
grateful. It's not a headspace I'm intimately familiar with, and I want to
get it right. (I know it's not the same for everyone but I wanna know if
I'm *totally* off the mark as far as behavior goes)
This is just a one-off, I'm not looking for a long-term beta. My
normal beta doesn't do PWP and this is the only one I've done or am likely to
Anyone interested please mail iocane - at - iocane - dot - net
Thanks for your time!