Hiya :-) Looking for another beta. I already have Jen, but would
like another pair of eyes--requirements below...
Ok I'm not sure what my writing style is, but I'm sure it's all over
the place. Here are a few things that you'd run into reading my
drafts: clichés, overuse/repeat of a word in a paragraph, over use
of 'then' and `ing' words, have sentences that don't make sense, too
wordy, using the wrong word, repeating ideas... and the regular
spelling, grammar, and standard commas problems.
As my beta, you'd have no problem pointing out all of the above &
more in highlights with comments. Have no problems with re-reading
and beta'n the revisionsand would encourage it. Point out things
that don't make sensesuggest having me re-write a sentence etc, and
hopefully why it needs to be rewritten-what I'm missing getting
across to a reader. Though would also point out what does work,
encourage & poke me when necessary. Would love if we meshed to
possibly have you beta future bits/discuss plot bunnies what to
write nextbut minimum you would be able commit to beta for the
month of May and turn-abouts with a reasonable amount of time within
a week, & steady communication between us, etc..
The piece in question is part 2 of 'Yearnings Bound in Friendship'
it is a slash/threesome between Rodney/John/Carson a kink piece. The
first part is posted at Wraithbait under Denyce--if you'd like to
check it out. The second part I'm still writing, and atm stands at a
5441, word count.
OK off to work anyone interested please contact me off listthank