I can look too, if you still need readers opinions.
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Sent: Wednesday, February 22, 2006 6:08
Subject: [wraithbeta] Opinions on Rodney
post-Allies fic (Gen)
I'm after opinions on a fic, rather than a beta, but if you
pointing out grammatical and spelling errors along the way feel
to do so.
It's a 2000 word gen fic following on from the events in
dark and includes drug use/torture. I've had two people look
at it but
I'm still unhappy with it, it's very similar to the first draft
wrote of the story and I still feel that there is room to hack large
rubbishy bits out of it although I'm not quite sure where from. If you
can help please email me - I really want to get this fic off my hard
drive and posted soon otherwise it may just stagnate there for