438GEN Beta needed
- Dec 31, 2006Hi listees!
What started out as my usual ficlet morphed into an actual story.
As you can guess by the title, The Hunting of the Snark, Rodney is a
featured character. I also hand out abuse to John and Ronon.
I'm looking for someone to beta content as well as any grammatical
nits and crits.
As it stands now, the story clocks in at a little over 6000 words.
Here's a snippet:
>Rodney did the only thing he could think to do: he ran. Overwhelmedwith terror, he was unable to process anything other than the need to
flee. Relying on his lower brain functions and fueled by adrenaline,
he became a creature of pure instinct. He ran, heedless of the rocks
that tripped him at every turn, at the numerous skin tears and
bruises he collected with every fall. He continued to pick himself
up and run on. He forced air into tortured lungs, his hand digging
into his side where abused muscles ached in protest of his continuing
headlong flight. He might have continued on for miles, if he had not
stumbled into a patch of dense vegetation. The vines did not deter
him; they merely slowed his progress. He fought his way through the
tangled vegetation that towered over his head and tried to keep him
captive. The dark density of the vines began to decrease, and Rodney
struggled to reach the promised daylight. It was the last thing he
Thank you in advance.
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