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Re: A Bit of Bush, “Do I look, as though I’m ‘full’?" (Bernard 41829)

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  • Bernard d
    G day Wings, Spot on again, My Old China, Crikey, I must have been full! I get into strife like this because, for some reason I abhor ragged line lengths...I
    Message 1 of 3 , Jun 3, 2013
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      G'day Wings,
      Spot on again, My Old China,
      Crikey, I must have been full! I get into
      strife like this because, for some reason
      I abhor ragged line lengths...I do recall
      shoving in the "Oh" but didn't notice I'd
      somehow forgotten a "you" in the process.
      Dropping the "will" is the obvious answer.
      Cheers, Old Son,
      Bernie...

      --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "Wings081" <wings081@...> wrote:
      >
      >
      > Hi Bernie my old mate.
      > Haven't heard from you awhile and thought you'd gone walkabout.
      > True to form I've got a bit of nit-picking with your latest.
      > last line: "Oh Blondie will get this man a Bundy OP etc"
      >
      > I believe the word 'will' is redundant unless I'm reading it wrong.
      > Anyway good to see you up to your usual form.
      > As Always
      > Wings.
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