Re: A Bit of Bush, Do I look, as though Im full?" (Bernard 41829)
- G'day Wings,
Spot on again, My Old China,
Crikey, I must have been full! I get into
strife like this because, for some reason
I abhor ragged line lengths...I do recall
shoving in the "Oh" but didn't notice I'd
somehow forgotten a "you" in the process.
Dropping the "will" is the obvious answer.
Cheers, Old Son,
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "Wings081" <wings081@...> wrote:
> Hi Bernie my old mate.
> Haven't heard from you awhile and thought you'd gone walkabout.
> True to form I've got a bit of nit-picking with your latest.
> last line: "Oh Blondie will get this man a Bundy OP etc"
> I believe the word 'will' is redundant unless I'm reading it wrong.
> Anyway good to see you up to your usual form.
> As Always