For all the writing teachers!
- Dear Writer & Poets:
My friend, Carol, who teaches English in Soporo, Japan shared this link with me. It will either make you laugh or weep.
- Hi Suzi.
Re. "It will either make you laugh or weep"
I did both except for the second number 3:
"McBride fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like a Hefty bag filled with vegetable soup".
Once I'd looked up the definition of the term 'Hefty Bag'(I'm a Brit) I thought the simile was quite good and could imagine the contents of a bag containing human remains after dropping 12 stories.
Vegetable soup might be an accurate description. Much the same as a suicide bomber in his truck on his way to meet up with his 27 virgins as promised.
Good laugh Suzi
--- In email@example.com, "Susan Donahue" <suzianne411@...> wrote:
> Dear Writer & Poets:
> My friend, Carol, who teaches English in Soporo, Japan shared this link with me. It will either make you laugh or weep.