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Re: Help with beginning

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  • tdwendella
    I like this idea, I think I m going to use it. Thanks, Langley.
    Message 1 of 8 , Aug 7, 2009
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      I like this idea, I think I'm going to use it. Thanks, Langley.
      --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, tdl4games <tdl4games@...> wrote:
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      > It is cheap but have her stabbed through curtain.  Especially if the protagonist had lifted the victim and was kissing her while slowly spinning..  He would wonder two things.  First was the dagger meant for him and was that spark he felt when he kissed her soul leaving. 
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      > Langley
      >  Be kind to others, they outnumber you six billion to one.
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      > From: tdwendella <tdwendella@...>
      > To: ticket2write@yahoogroups.com
      > Sent: Thursday, August 6, 2009 10:59:23 AM
      > Subject: [ticket2write] Help with beginning
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      > I need help with a beginning to story that I want to write. It is set in ancient Egypt. It is a beautiful night with a crest moon in the sky & you an enchanting woman, staring out at the night, when suddenly she is stabbed in the back, but you don't see by who at first. Can somebody please help me with a good beginning for this story? Thanks so much for any help that you can give me.
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