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  • Diva
    Dear Albi, I think Shimmer is the third or fourth title choice. I m dreadful with titles. But Scarlet Bolt? Zounds! ;-) Diva albiaicehouse
    Message 1 of 11 , Apr 2, 2005
      Dear Albi,
       
      I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful with titles.  But "Scarlet Bolt?"  Zounds!     ;-)
       
      Diva

      albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:


      Diva,

      Do you like the title?

      Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...

      When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?

      Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
      glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
      enough for the awakening, the huge shift.

      I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
      stark red rose.  That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.

      How about "Scarlet Bolt"?

      albi


      --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
      <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
      >
      >
      > Shimmer
      >
      > What have you done?
      > I was accepting of morning fog
      > and the flat gray of the river
      > that flowed through my day.
      >
      > I'd grown tone-deaf
      > to fog horns and
      > the searing slice of sirens
      > went unnoticed too.
      >
      > You had to
      > disturb my palette
      > with that red rose
      > on my keyboard.
      >
      > And now all I see,
      > primarily,
      > are pastels
      > and rainbows.
      >
      >
      > 03/30/05  Diva
      > aka WordFaery








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    • albiaicehouse
      Point taken. Scarlet Awakening albi ... with titles. But Scarlet Bolt? Zounds! ;-) ... Service.
      Message 2 of 11 , Apr 4, 2005
        Point taken.

        "Scarlet Awakening"

        albi

        --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
        > Dear Albi,
        >
        > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
        with titles. But "Scarlet Bolt?" Zounds! ;-)
        >
        > Diva
        >
        > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
        >
        >
        > Diva,
        >
        > Do you like the title?
        >
        > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
        >
        > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
        >
        > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
        > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
        > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
        >
        > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
        > stark red rose. That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
        >
        > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
        >
        > albi
        >
        >
        > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
        > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
        > >
        > >
        > > Shimmer
        > >
        > > What have you done?
        > > I was accepting of morning fog
        > > and the flat gray of the river
        > > that flowed through my day.
        > >
        > > I'd grown tone-deaf
        > > to fog horns and
        > > the searing slice of sirens
        > > went unnoticed too.
        > >
        > > You had to
        > > disturb my palette
        > > with that red rose
        > > on my keyboard.
        > >
        > > And now all I see,
        > > primarily,
        > > are pastels
        > > and rainbows.
        > >
        > >
        > > 03/30/05 Diva
        > > aka WordFaery
        >
        >
        >
        >
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      • Diva
        uh, nooo albiaicehouse wrote: Point taken. Scarlet Awakening albi ... with titles. But Scarlet Bolt? Zounds! ;-) ...
        Message 3 of 11 , Apr 4, 2005
          uh,
          nooo

          albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:


          Point taken.

          "Scarlet Awakening"

          albi

          --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
          > Dear Albi,

          > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
          with titles.  But "Scarlet Bolt?"  Zounds!     ;-)

          > Diva
          >
          > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
          >
          >
          > Diva,
          >
          > Do you like the title?
          >
          > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
          >
          > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
          >
          > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
          > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
          > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
          >
          > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
          > stark red rose.  That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
          >
          > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
          >
          > albi
          >
          >
          > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
          > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
          > >
          > >
          > > Shimmer
          > >
          > > What have you done?
          > > I was accepting of morning fog
          > > and the flat gray of the river
          > > that flowed through my day.
          > >
          > > I'd grown tone-deaf
          > > to fog horns and
          > > the searing slice of sirens
          > > went unnoticed too.
          > >
          > > You had to
          > > disturb my palette
          > > with that red rose
          > > on my keyboard.
          > >
          > > And now all I see,
          > > primarily,
          > > are pastels
          > > and rainbows.
          > >
          > >
          > > 03/30/05  Diva
          > > aka WordFaery
          >
          >
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        • nigel_tiptoe
          Me too - I much prefer Shimmer, How about: ... are pastels and rainbows shimmering on the water or something like that, if you have to justify the title?
          Message 4 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
            Me too - I much prefer Shimmer, How about:
            '... are pastels
            and rainbows'
            shimmering on the water

            or something like that, if you have to justify the title? Mind you,
            as suggested in an earlier post, I think the shimmering meanings of
            the poem already do that.

            And Albi, I need to apologise for misreading albiaicehouse and
            calling you Alice. I'm sure you never fell down a rabbit whole in
            your life, let alone was in any danger of losing your head.

            Nigelfool

            --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
            wrote:
            > uh,
            > nooo
            >
            > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
            >
            >
            > Point taken.
            >
            > "Scarlet Awakening"
            >
            > albi
            >
            > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
            wrote:
            > > Dear Albi,
            > >
            > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm
            dreadful
            > with titles. But "Scarlet Bolt?" Zounds! ;-)
            > >
            > > Diva
            > >
            > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
            > >
            > >
            > > Diva,
            > >
            > > Do you like the title?
            > >
            > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
            > >
            > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
            > >
            > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
            > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to
            prepare me
            > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
            > >
            > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
            > > stark red rose. That's the real center of that poem...the red
            rose.
            > >
            > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
            > >
            > > albi
            > >
            > >
            > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
            > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
            > > >
            > > >
            > > > Shimmer
            > > >
            > > > What have you done?
            > > > I was accepting of morning fog
            > > > and the flat gray of the river
            > > > that flowed through my day.
            > > >
            > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
            > > > to fog horns and
            > > > the searing slice of sirens
            > > > went unnoticed too.
            > > >
            > > > You had to
            > > > disturb my palette
            > > > with that red rose
            > > > on my keyboard.
            > > >
            > > > And now all I see,
            > > > primarily,
            > > > are pastels
            > > > and rainbows.
            > > >
            > > >
            > > > 03/30/05 Diva
            > > > aka WordFaery
            > >
            > >
            > >
            > >
            > >
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          • albiaicehouse
            Shattered Prism albi
            Message 5 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
              "Shattered Prism"

              albi


              --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
              > uh,
              > nooo
              >
              > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
              >
              >
              > Point taken.
              >
              > "Scarlet Awakening"
              >
              > albi
              >
              > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
              wrote:
              > > Dear Albi,
              > >
              > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
              > with titles. But "Scarlet Bolt?" Zounds! ;-)
              > >
              > > Diva
              > >
              > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
              > >
              > >
              > > Diva,
              > >
              > > Do you like the title?
              > >
              > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
              > >
              > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
              > >
              > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
              > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
              > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
              > >
              > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
              > > stark red rose. That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
              > >
              > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
              > >
              > > albi
              > >
              > >
              > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
              > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
              > > >
              > > >
              > > > Shimmer
              > > >
              > > > What have you done?
              > > > I was accepting of morning fog
              > > > and the flat gray of the river
              > > > that flowed through my day.
              > > >
              > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
              > > > to fog horns and
              > > > the searing slice of sirens
              > > > went unnoticed too.
              > > >
              > > > You had to
              > > > disturb my palette
              > > > with that red rose
              > > > on my keyboard.
              > > >
              > > > And now all I see,
              > > > primarily,
              > > > are pastels
              > > > and rainbows.
              > > >
              > > >
              > > > 03/30/05 Diva
              > > > aka WordFaery
              > >
              > >
              > >
              > >
              > >
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            • albiaicehouse
              Nigel, ahhhhhhh, that s how you got to alice I guess its a valid contraction: al ice lol albi
              Message 6 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
                Nigel,

                ahhhhhhh, that's how you got to alice

                I guess its a valid contraction: al'ice

                lol

                albi

                --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, nigel_tiptoe <no_reply@y...> wrote:
                >
                >
                > Me too - I much prefer Shimmer, How about:
                > '... are pastels
                > and rainbows'
                > shimmering on the water
                >
                > or something like that, if you have to justify the title? Mind you,
                > as suggested in an earlier post, I think the shimmering meanings of
                > the poem already do that.
                >
                > And Albi, I need to apologise for misreading albiaicehouse and
                > calling you Alice. I'm sure you never fell down a rabbit whole in
                > your life, let alone was in any danger of losing your head.
                >
                > Nigelfool
                >
                > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                > wrote:
                > > uh,
                > > nooo
                > >
                > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                > >
                > >
                > > Point taken.
                > >
                > > "Scarlet Awakening"
                > >
                > > albi
                > >
                > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                > wrote:
                > > > Dear Albi,
                > > >
                > > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm
                > dreadful
                > > with titles. But "Scarlet Bolt?" Zounds! ;-)
                > > >
                > > > Diva
                > > >
                > > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                > > >
                > > >
                > > > Diva,
                > > >
                > > > Do you like the title?
                > > >
                > > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
                > > >
                > > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
                > > >
                > > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
                > > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to
                > prepare me
                > > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
                > > >
                > > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
                > > > stark red rose. That's the real center of that poem...the red
                > rose.
                > > >
                > > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
                > > >
                > > > albi
                > > >
                > > >
                > > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
                > > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                > > > >
                > > > >
                > > > > Shimmer
                > > > >
                > > > > What have you done?
                > > > > I was accepting of morning fog
                > > > > and the flat gray of the river
                > > > > that flowed through my day.
                > > > >
                > > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
                > > > > to fog horns and
                > > > > the searing slice of sirens
                > > > > went unnoticed too.
                > > > >
                > > > > You had to
                > > > > disturb my palette
                > > > > with that red rose
                > > > > on my keyboard.
                > > > >
                > > > > And now all I see,
                > > > > primarily,
                > > > > are pastels
                > > > > and rainbows.
                > > > >
                > > > >
                > > > > 03/30/05 Diva
                > > > > aka WordFaery
                > > >
                > > >
                > > >
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              • albiaicehouse
                Chromatic Shift
                Message 7 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
                  "Chromatic Shift"

                  --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                  > uh,
                  > nooo
                  >
                  > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                  >
                  >
                  > Point taken.
                  >
                  > "Scarlet Awakening"
                  >
                  > albi
                  >
                  > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                  wrote:
                  > > Dear Albi,
                  > >
                  > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
                  > with titles. But "Scarlet Bolt?" Zounds! ;-)
                  > >
                  > > Diva
                  > >
                  > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                  > >
                  > >
                  > > Diva,
                  > >
                  > > Do you like the title?
                  > >
                  > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
                  > >
                  > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
                  > >
                  > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
                  > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
                  > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
                  > >
                  > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
                  > > stark red rose. That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
                  > >
                  > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
                  > >
                  > > albi
                  > >
                  > >
                  > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
                  > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                  > > >
                  > > >
                  > > > Shimmer
                  > > >
                  > > > What have you done?
                  > > > I was accepting of morning fog
                  > > > and the flat gray of the river
                  > > > that flowed through my day.
                  > > >
                  > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
                  > > > to fog horns and
                  > > > the searing slice of sirens
                  > > > went unnoticed too.
                  > > >
                  > > > You had to
                  > > > disturb my palette
                  > > > with that red rose
                  > > > on my keyboard.
                  > > >
                  > > > And now all I see,
                  > > > primarily,
                  > > > are pastels
                  > > > and rainbows.
                  > > >
                  > > >
                  > > > 03/30/05 Diva
                  > > > aka WordFaery
                  > >
                  > >
                  > >
                  > >
                  > >
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                • albiaicehouse
                  Color of My Life or You Changed the Colors of My Life
                  Message 8 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
                    "Color of My Life"

                    or

                    "You Changed the Colors of My Life"

                    --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                    > uh,
                    > nooo
                    >
                    > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                    >
                    >
                    > Point taken.
                    >
                    > "Scarlet Awakening"
                    >
                    > albi
                    >
                    > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                    wrote:
                    > > Dear Albi,
                    > >
                    > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
                    > with titles. But "Scarlet Bolt?" Zounds! ;-)
                    > >
                    > > Diva
                    > >
                    > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                    > >
                    > >
                    > > Diva,
                    > >
                    > > Do you like the title?
                    > >
                    > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
                    > >
                    > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
                    > >
                    > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
                    > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
                    > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
                    > >
                    > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
                    > > stark red rose. That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
                    > >
                    > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
                    > >
                    > > albi
                    > >
                    > >
                    > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
                    > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                    > > >
                    > > >
                    > > > Shimmer
                    > > >
                    > > > What have you done?
                    > > > I was accepting of morning fog
                    > > > and the flat gray of the river
                    > > > that flowed through my day.
                    > > >
                    > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
                    > > > to fog horns and
                    > > > the searing slice of sirens
                    > > > went unnoticed too.
                    > > >
                    > > > You had to
                    > > > disturb my palette
                    > > > with that red rose
                    > > > on my keyboard.
                    > > >
                    > > > And now all I see,
                    > > > primarily,
                    > > > are pastels
                    > > > and rainbows.
                    > > >
                    > > >
                    > > > 03/30/05 Diva
                    > > > aka WordFaery
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                  • Diva
                    hmm..... Your suggestion would tie things off nicely. Thanks. Diva nigel_tiptoe wrote: Me too - I much prefer Shimmer, How about:
                    Message 9 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
                      hmm.....
                      Your suggestion would tie things off nicely. Thanks.
                       
                      Diva
                       


                      nigel_tiptoe <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:


                      Me too - I much prefer Shimmer, How about:
                      '... are pastels
                      and rainbows'
                      shimmering on the water

                      or something like that, if you have to justify the title? Mind you,
                      as suggested in an earlier post, I think the shimmering meanings of
                      the poem already do that.

                      And Albi, I need to apologise for misreading albiaicehouse and
                      calling you Alice. I'm sure you never fell down a rabbit whole in
                      your life, let alone was in any danger of losing your head.

                      Nigelfool

                      --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                      wrote:
                      > uh,
                      > nooo
                      >
                      > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                      >
                      >
                      > Point taken.
                      >
                      > "Scarlet Awakening"
                      >
                      > albi
                      >
                      > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                      wrote:
                      > > Dear Albi,
                      > > 
                      > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm
                      dreadful
                      > with titles.  But "Scarlet Bolt?"  Zounds!     ;-)
                      > > 
                      > > Diva
                      > >
                      > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                      > >
                      > >
                      > > Diva,
                      > >
                      > > Do you like the title?
                      > >
                      > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
                      > >
                      > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
                      > >
                      > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
                      > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to
                      prepare me
                      > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
                      > >
                      > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
                      > > stark red rose.  That's the real center of that poem...the red
                      rose.
                      > >
                      > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
                      > >
                      > > albi
                      > >
                      > >
                      > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
                      > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                      > > >
                      > > >
                      > > > Shimmer
                      > > >
                      > > > What have you done?
                      > > > I was accepting of morning fog
                      > > > and the flat gray of the river
                      > > > that flowed through my day.
                      > > >
                      > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
                      > > > to fog horns and
                      > > > the searing slice of sirens
                      > > > went unnoticed too.
                      > > >
                      > > > You had to
                      > > > disturb my palette
                      > > > with that red rose
                      > > > on my keyboard.
                      > > >
                      > > > And now all I see,
                      > > > primarily,
                      > > > are pastels
                      > > > and rainbows.
                      > > >
                      > > >
                      > > > 03/30/05  Diva
                      > > > aka WordFaery
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                    • Diva
                      That has potential albiaicehouse wrote: Shattered Prism albi ... Learn more about ticket2wite at http://ticket2write.tripod.com
                      Message 10 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
                        That has potential

                        albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:


                        "Shattered Prism"

                        albi


                        --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                        > uh,
                        > nooo
                        >
                        > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                        >
                        >
                        > Point taken.
                        >
                        > "Scarlet Awakening"
                        >
                        > albi
                        >
                        > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                        wrote:
                        > > Dear Albi,
                        > > 
                        > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
                        > with titles.  But "Scarlet Bolt?"  Zounds!     ;-)
                        > > 
                        > > Diva
                        > >
                        > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                        > >
                        > >
                        > > Diva,
                        > >
                        > > Do you like the title?
                        > >
                        > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
                        > >
                        > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
                        > >
                        > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
                        > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
                        > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
                        > >
                        > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
                        > > stark red rose.  That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
                        > >
                        > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
                        > >
                        > > albi
                        > >
                        > >
                        > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
                        > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                        > > >
                        > > >
                        > > > Shimmer
                        > > >
                        > > > What have you done?
                        > > > I was accepting of morning fog
                        > > > and the flat gray of the river
                        > > > that flowed through my day.
                        > > >
                        > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
                        > > > to fog horns and
                        > > > the searing slice of sirens
                        > > > went unnoticed too.
                        > > >
                        > > > You had to
                        > > > disturb my palette
                        > > > with that red rose
                        > > > on my keyboard.
                        > > >
                        > > > And now all I see,
                        > > > primarily,
                        > > > are pastels
                        > > > and rainbows.
                        > > >
                        > > >
                        > > > 03/30/05  Diva
                        > > > aka WordFaery
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                      • Diva
                        **giggling** albiaicehouse wrote: Chromatic Shift ... Learn more about ticket2wite at http://ticket2write.tripod.com ... Yahoo!
                        Message 11 of 11 , Apr 5, 2005
                          **giggling**

                          albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:


                          "Chromatic Shift"

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                          > uh,
                          > nooo
                          >
                          > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                          >
                          >
                          > Point taken.
                          >
                          > "Scarlet Awakening"
                          >
                          > albi
                          >
                          > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, Diva <the_only_data_diva@y...>
                          wrote:
                          > > Dear Albi,
                          > > 
                          > > I think "Shimmer" is the third or fourth title choice. I'm dreadful
                          > with titles.  But "Scarlet Bolt?"  Zounds!     ;-)
                          > > 
                          > > Diva
                          > >
                          > > albiaicehouse <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
                          > >
                          > >
                          > > Diva,
                          > >
                          > > Do you like the title?
                          > >
                          > > Of course you like it, because you chose it, but...
                          > >
                          > > When you reread it now, can you think of better titles?
                          > >
                          > > Shimmer goes with the rainbow, maybe, at the end, but I think they
                          > > glow more than anything. The word "shimmer" doesn't seem to prepare me
                          > > enough for the awakening, the huge shift.
                          > >
                          > > I'd like one better that presages the change brought about by the
                          > > stark red rose.  That's the real center of that poem...the red rose.
                          > >
                          > > How about "Scarlet Bolt"?
                          > >
                          > > albi
                          > >
                          > >
                          > > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "the_only_data_diva"
                          > > <the_only_data_diva@y...> wrote:
                          > > >
                          > > >
                          > > > Shimmer
                          > > >
                          > > > What have you done?
                          > > > I was accepting of morning fog
                          > > > and the flat gray of the river
                          > > > that flowed through my day.
                          > > >
                          > > > I'd grown tone-deaf
                          > > > to fog horns and
                          > > > the searing slice of sirens
                          > > > went unnoticed too.
                          > > >
                          > > > You had to
                          > > > disturb my palette
                          > > > with that red rose
                          > > > on my keyboard.
                          > > >
                          > > > And now all I see,
                          > > > primarily,
                          > > > are pastels
                          > > > and rainbows.
                          > > >
                          > > >
                          > > > 03/30/05  Diva
                          > > > aka WordFaery
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