Re: A woman like me (19324)
- --- I think that my flaws are just carelessness, I can't really use
the line ,hey Im a woman so I should be emotional,lol,I have a very
bad habit of not proof reading things.Thank you for your
reply,sometimes Criticism can improve a person!!!It would be nice if
yahoo had a spell check here and on the mess,lol it might make me
In email@example.com, wings081 <no_reply@y...> wrote:
> Dear Judy
> I believe you must have been overcome with emotion when you wrote
> this piece.
> There are so many errors they disrupt the readability by breaking
> the flow of what could be a good poem.
> You really should read your work aloud before submitting it to the
> I am confident you will accept this harsh critique with the good
> grace it is offered from a friend who wishes you nothing but
> well and who looks forward to your continued participation on these
> pages .
> As always