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  • David Barber
    Seeds. A Thousands seeds spread out Moving among the rocks, stones, hard earth. Which ones will endure, Through draughts, winds, sand. Finding fertile ground
    Message 1 of 4 , May 3, 2004
      Seeds.

      A Thousands seeds spread out
      Moving among the rocks, stones, hard earth.

      Which ones will endure,
      Through draughts, winds, sand.

      Finding fertile ground
      Amidst imitations and promises

      Break out of the shell
      Push out roots, leaves and raising up.

      Blooming and bringing fruit
      More than just themselves.

      Which ones will expect
      It�s someone else�s job.

      3 May 2004





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    • Stephan Anstey
      Really good David. Exceptional ending. i did wonder if maybe find fertile ground might be better...putting a comma after hard earth..making it one long
      Message 2 of 4 , May 5, 2004
        Really good David. Exceptional ending.

        i did wonder if maybe 'find fertile ground' might be better...putting a comma after hard
        earth..making it one long sentence..

        Hmm... I don't know.

        Regards,
        stephan

        --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, David Barber <ihman59@y...> wrote:
        > Seeds.
        >
        > A Thousands seeds spread out
        > Moving among the rocks, stones, hard earth.
        >
        > Which ones will endure,
        > Through draughts, winds, sand.
        >
        > Finding fertile ground
        > Amidst imitations and promises
        >
        > Break out of the shell
        > Push out roots, leaves and raising up.
        >
        > Blooming and bringing fruit
        > More than just themselves.
        >
        > Which ones will expect
        > It's someone else's job.
        >
        > 3 May 2004
        >
        >
        >
        >
        >
        > __________________________________
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      • David Barber
        Again, great suggestions! ... __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Win a $20,000 Career Makeover at Yahoo! HotJobs
        Message 3 of 4 , May 6, 2004
          Again, great suggestions!
          --- Stephan Anstey <stephan@...> wrote:
          >
          > Really good David. Exceptional ending.
          >
          > i did wonder if maybe 'find fertile ground' might be
          > better...putting a comma after hard
          > earth..making it one long sentence..
          >
          > Hmm... I don't know.
          >
          > Regards,
          > stephan
          >
          > --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, David Barber
          > <ihman59@y...> wrote:
          > > Seeds.
          > >
          > > A Thousands seeds spread out
          > > Moving among the rocks, stones, hard earth.
          > >
          > > Which ones will endure,
          > > Through draughts, winds, sand.
          > >
          > > Finding fertile ground
          > > Amidst imitations and promises
          > >
          > > Break out of the shell
          > > Push out roots, leaves and raising up.
          > >
          > > Blooming and bringing fruit
          > > More than just themselves.
          > >
          > > Which ones will expect
          > > It's someone else's job.
          > >
          > > 3 May 2004
          > >
          > >
          > >
          > >
          > >
          > > __________________________________
          > > Do you Yahoo!?
          > > Win a $20,000 Career Makeover at Yahoo! HotJobs
          > >
          > http://hotjobs.sweepstakes.yahoo.com/careermakeover
          >
          >
          >





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