Dear Trisha: You came to the right place! I quit writing romance
novels a while back, but I do have some experience in that field.
I am a past president of the Chicago-North Chapter of Romance
Writers of America, attended a lot of national RWA conferences,
and taught genre fiction classes. If you want a practiced eye to
look over your work before you submit to e-harlequin, I would be
glad to give you a hand.
There are lots of other people here who are very good at
critiques and will be happy to offer opinions, too. Just post and
ask. If you have deadlines for contests, let us know so we will
respond soon enough.
P.S. Just a reminder to all members...This is what we are about.
When a writer needs a little help, please feel free to voice an
opinion. We are professional writers and won't get upset if we
hear our work critiqued. That is what we want. Our policy at
ticket2write is that we are on the honor system and are expected
to critique two pieces for each one we post for consideration. If
we all try to meet that goal, we will really benefit from the
--- In email@example.com
, "Trisha Williams"
> I have been writing for Eharlequin.com where they have a
> round robins and contests going on. Recently I submitted a
> for the big round Robin Contest called "Night Magic". I didn't
> some one else did and after reading what she wrote I know
> submission wasn't even close. I could really use some advice
> how I could have made my chapter better. I am just learning to
> I have had several poems published and I use to write for
> but I have never had any thing on a large scale published
> advice or critiques would be very helpful.
> Night Magic is a BLAZE story and contains graphic
> may not be suitable for this site. So I didn't post it here. Instead
> I have provided links to both the actual Round Robin and to my
> chapter submission. if either site is a problem to visit or view
> then please email and I will email you both the entry and the
> winning story.
> "Night Magic" @ Eharlequin
> My Submission for Chapter 3
> thank you
> Happy Writing all