35393Re: ACROSTIC - A Poem
- Jan 1, 2008Jim,
Thanks for your honest feedback. I will ponder it respectfully as I
dig for other posibilities.
--- In email@example.com, "Jim Lamoreux" <jlamoreux@...>
> ---I was reading along with this thinking what an artfully
> when I landed on the word "yell." I have no idea why I stoppedthere. It
> makes me think of two things. 1.) we go from royalty to fishwife inthe
> voice and 2.) that may not be bad. Maybe it is good that I stoppedthere.
> For some reason "yell" just stands out for me in contrast to thingslike
> "Palpate my shores" and "the way you talk to me." This is justa "reader's
> evaluation." Others may not even have noticed, the poem is so tightand
> nicely done.
> Harbors and the way you talk to me
> Adrenaline and the highest spring tides - Come:
> Play waves of sax or piano to me
> Palpate my shores with wine and roses
> Yell out my name in ecstasy!
> C Gwen Ames, 2007
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