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35393Re: ACROSTIC - A Poem

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  • queen_of_cryptic_cyphers
    Jan 1, 2008
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      Jim,

      Thanks for your honest feedback. I will ponder it respectfully as I
      dig for other posibilities.

      Gwen

      --- In ticket2write@yahoogroups.com, "Jim Lamoreux" <jlamoreux@...>
      wrote:
      >
      >
      >
      > ---I was reading along with this thinking what an artfully
      contrived poem
      > when I landed on the word "yell." I have no idea why I stopped
      there. It
      > makes me think of two things. 1.) we go from royalty to fishwife in
      the
      > voice and 2.) that may not be bad. Maybe it is good that I stopped
      there.
      > For some reason "yell" just stands out for me in contrast to things
      like
      > "Palpate my shores" and "the way you talk to me." This is just
      a "reader's
      > evaluation." Others may not even have noticed, the poem is so tight
      and
      > nicely done.
      >
      >
      > ACROSTIC
      >
      > Harbors and the way you talk to me
      > Adrenaline and the highest spring tides - Come:
      > Play waves of sax or piano to me
      > Palpate my shores with wine and roses
      > Yell out my name in ecstasy!
      >
      > C Gwen Ames, 2007
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