Re: [rewildnewengland] Rewild Explanation
- Totally! I still feel, though, like that particular piece of writing needs more. Can't place my finger on what needs adding, though.On Wed, Mar 18, 2009 at 7:42 AM, Misko Stephane Collette <misko.kinoo@...> wrote:
Dan, I really like your 'Rewild Explanation' document. I put a link for it on my blog. Would you permit me to post it? And if I can eventually translate it, would you accept if I posted the french version?
I find it very complete, but hey, if you ever put your finger on the 'missing part', please, if you can, let me know and I'll post the new and improved version, ;¬)
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- Talking to Kris today, I think we basically figured what it needs is some imagery. I'm going to add a narrative about what I envision neo-indigenous life can be like, using lots of descriptive language. After that, all the stuff about civilization and rewilding will have more context and therefore more cohesion.
That's great! Looking forward to it.
I've started the translation. I must tell you I'm no professional translator though.
Check out 'Aquila ka Hecate', she mentioned your essay this morning on her blog.
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