Re: A new renhai: Trapped in Leoneliness
- A lovely renhai; enjoyed
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, John Daleiden <daleidenj@...> wrote:
> A new renhai; comments welcome!!
> Rita Odeh, Israel and John Daleiden, US
> Trapped in Loneliness
> the sudden silence
> of the caged love bird...
> cloudy sky /ro
> a kite trapped in an oak tree-- /jd
> the free sparrow's song lingers /ro
> at the bistro
> she sips wine alone...waiting...
> laughter all around /jd
> Theme: Trapped / Entrapment; a secondary and parallel theme of loneliness is associated with the trapped theme.
> Kigo: Kite--Spring--Observances: The Haiku Handbook. William J. Higginson with Penny Harter, p. 269.
> Links 1 / 2: caged bird / trapped kite; caged bird / free sparrow (b)
> Links 2 / 3: kite, bird are alone / the woman is alone
> Links 3 / 1: laughter / silence (opposite emotions)