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Re: A new renhai: Trapped in Leoneliness

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  • gillena2001
    A lovely renhai; enjoyed much love gillena [:)] ... loneliness is associated with the trapped theme. ... Higginson with Penny Harter, p. 269. ... (b)
    Message 1 of 3 , Jun 5, 2012
      A lovely renhai; enjoyed

      much love
      gillena

      :)





      --- In renhai@yahoogroups.com, John Daleiden <daleidenj@...> wrote:
      >
      > A new renhai; comments welcome!!
      >  
      > Rita Odeh, Israel and John Daleiden, US
      >  
      > Trapped in Loneliness
      >  
      > the sudden silence
      > of the caged love bird...
      > cloudy sky   /ro
      >  
      > a kite trapped in an oak tree--   /jd
      > the free sparrow's song lingers  /ro
      >  
      > at the bistro
      > she sips wine alone...waiting...
      > laughter all around    /jd
      >  
      > Theme: Trapped / Entrapment; a secondary and parallel theme of loneliness is associated with the trapped theme.
      > Kigo: Kite--Spring--Observances:  The Haiku Handbook. William J. Higginson with Penny Harter, p. 269.
      >  
      > Links 1 / 2:  caged bird / trapped kite;  caged bird / free sparrow (b)
      > Links 2 / 3:  kite, bird are alone / the woman is alone
      > Links 3 / 1:  laughter  /  silence  (opposite emotions)
      >
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