First impressions of the Drout Encyclopedia
- That's _J.R.R. Tolkien Encyclopedia: Scholarship and Critical Assessment_,
ed. Michael D.C. Drout (Routledge, 2007 - that's the copyright date, 2007).
I haven't read it all by any means, but I've looked through it and noticed
1. What a huge volume (774 pages, letter size) with big print. Yes, I
know, the print on most books may be too small, but it's a good thing the
publishers didn't provide wider margins or the space-wasting illustrations
found in most books of this kind, or it'd be even more physically unwieldy.
2. Thank goodness, none of my contributions were mangled in copy-editing.
In fact they seem to have been hardly touched at all, which is less than
most of my editors, good or bad, do. In particular, "Further Reading"
sections. Either I didn't know, or forgot being told, that articles should
have these. In a few places where I did quote works and provide
bibliographical citations these have been put as "Further Reading", but
look at my entry on Parodies, which discusses eight books and three web
sites, and nobody either asked me for full bibliographical references or
added them themselves. Granted that I should have done so without being
asked, but: did anybody edit this book?
3. "See also" references are rampantly inconsistent. For one instance, my
entry on Jim Dundas-Grant of the Inklings mentions Dr. Havard, and there's
a "see also" to my entry on him; but that entry on Dr. Havard does not
mention Dundas-Grant and does not have a see also to him, where it would be
needed. The entry on "Education" (vague title, turns out to mean Tolkien's
education) ends abruptly at his high-school graduation, with no indication
in the "See also" or anywhere else that the story is taken up under
"Oxford", which is basically a biography of Tolkien for his years there and
says virtually nothing about the context of the place.
4. The Oxford entry also contains what may be the most unintentionally
hilarious sentence in the book, on p. 491: "Tolkien's secret engagement to
Edith would end soon with Edith's reception into the Roman Catholic
Church." This sounds for all the world as if he dumped her for turning
Catholic, when what is evidently meant is that her becoming Catholic meant
the engagement need no longer be kept secret. Yes, context makes it clear
(eventually), but why trip up the reader on the way?
5. Some of the entries on characters and places in Tolkien's work read like
entries for a Foster's Guide to Middle-earth rather than for a Tolkien
encyclopedia, starting out describing their place in the sub-creation (i.e.
as if they were real) and only later getting to their role as fictional
creations. This would be less irritating if the entries written this way
didn't also fail to say where the sub-creational information on them comes
from. I know, and you know, but prospective readers of the encyclopedia
don't. But other entries of this kind, by different hands, are quite
conscientious. Checking on which ones wrote which way, I can't say I'm a
6. Again, did anybody edit this book? There are two separate entries on
the book _The Adventures of Tom Bombadil_, explaining the same things, one
by Gene Hargrove under its title, and one by Tom Shippey under "Poems by
Tolkien: _The Adventures of Tom Bombadil._" Did nobody notice?
7. Why is there a biographical entry on Susan Dagnall, the go-between who
brought _The Hobbit_ to Allen and Unwin, and none on the Unwins, who
continued to be so important in Tolkien's life? They're only mentioned in
passing in various places; nothing about them as people. Did anybody edit
this thing at all?
8. I'm not going to count the other rampant inconsistencies in what got
entries and what didn't, and in approach, length, etc of comparable
entries. There's just too much. Except to note that some topics are
chopped up into tiny bits under different entries, while just about
everything on Elvish linguistics is under one very long entry, "Languages
Invented by Tolkien" by Carl Hostetter, which is so clear and so good that
it suggests the entire encyclopedia should have been written this way, as a
set of long essays on broad relevant topics instead of little bitty ones on
a lot of peripheral topics some of which are barely connected to Tolkien at
all. Look at the entry on Aquinas, which begins by noting that Tolkien is
never known to have mentioned him. _That's_ a promising start in a Tolkien
9. This is not my copy. I borrowed it. The price being charged
contributors - or anyone else for that matter - is obscene, and despite
some valuable material I can hardly call the book worth it.
- On Dec 22, 2006, at 9:24 PM, David Bratman wrote:
> just aboutWOW! Thank you for this, David! Coming from you, this is high praise
> everything on Elvish linguistics is under one very long entry,
> Invented by Tolkien" by Carl Hostetter, which is so clear and so
> good that
> it suggests the entire encyclopedia should have been written this way,
indeed! (And I DON'T say that lightly!)
- Oops, I meant to send that to David only, not the list. Sorry.
On Dec 29, 2006, at 9:10 PM, Carl F. Hostetter wrote:
> On Dec 22, 2006, at 9:24 PM, David Bratman wrote:
> > just about
> > everything on Elvish linguistics is under one very long entry,
> > "Languages
> > Invented by Tolkien" by Carl Hostetter, which is so clear and so
> > good that
> > it suggests the entire encyclopedia should have been written this
> WOW! Thank you for this, David! Coming from you, this is high praise
> indeed! (And I DON'T say that lightly!)