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  • Greve Gabi
    World Environment Day (5 June) : http://www.unep.org/wed/ which in Kenya has given rise to a new initiative : Soko bila waste :
    Message 1 of 1 , Jun 8, 2013
      World Environment Day (5 June) :

      http://www.unep.org/wed/

      which in Kenya has given rise to a new initiative : Soko bila waste :
      http://www.unep.org/wed/news/unep-gwa-food-waste-initiative.asp


      Comments by Isabelle sensei.


      Environment Day --
      form two students assigned
      to pick litter

      I like the haiku, but the word "up" is missing in line 3, which should
      read "to pick up litter".

      ~ Maurine Nafula



      busy students
      cleaning the whole school --
      Environment Day

      ~ Rose Akaliche


      busy students
      with tools all over the slum --
      Environment Day

      You have organised the words in your lines very well.

      ~ Violet Were


      Environment Day --
      I clean my farming tools
      after working

      ~ Peninah Wanjiru


      Environment Day --
      a sewage smell hits
      my nose

      ~ Lydiah Mbatha


      Environment Day --
      a lecturer talks the benefits
      of a clean society

      ~ Jacinta Wafula



      students gather
      to clean Soweto slum --
      Environment Day

      ~ Colfax Otieno


      he scoops
      a spade-full of rubbish --
      Environment Day

      ~ Max Kutai


      Environment Day --
      a student splashed by a
      dirty paper

      ~ Caroline Wanjiru


      Environment Day --
      a stinking sewage smell
      withdraws

      ~ Caxton Okoth


      they carry
      the dusty dustbin --
      Environment Day

      We do not know who "they" is. Could you revise the haiku and let us know?

      ~ Dorothy Syombua



      we burn
      the heap of litter --
      Environment Day

      ~ Denis Shakava

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      Thank you all very much!
      Gabi
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