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  • Ingrid Duran
    Jasmin, I liked this piece alot, there has been times when I can relate to this poem. Keep up the great work!!! Many Blessings, Ingrid Ms. Jackson
    Message 1 of 10 , Aug 4, 2005
      Jasmin, I liked this piece alot, there has been times when I can relate to this poem.  Keep up the great work!!!
      Many Blessings, Ingrid


      "Ms. Jackson" <trinimerican20743@...> wrote:

      Hello all.  This is my very first time submitting
      poetry and I would love to know what you all think
      about it.  Thanks for allowing me to share my words.

      Peace & Grace,
      Jasmin




      Poem Cry

      I love you.
      I blew it
      So you threw it.
      I love you
      I’m sorry.
      I love you
      You left me…
      You hate me?
      I love you
      Forgive me!
      You promised
      You loved me
      You loved me!
      Still, you left me.

      I love you.
      I need you.
      I breathe you.
      I messed up –
      I know.
      I love you!
      You and me - right
      You and me – wrong
      So what now?
      You and me – no more
      I’ll be fine.
      You’ll be good, I’m sure.
      You said…no we said, goodbye
      Please! No! Why!
      …I just had to make this poem cry


      -Jasmin


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    • toenairs@netzero.net
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      Message 2 of 10 , Aug 4, 2005
        I agree with Ingrid! That was beautiful!

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      • sasha coley
        That s a very beautiful poem. Straightforward and unique. With a very creative impact act the end.. Ms. Jackson wrote: Hello
        Message 3 of 10 , Aug 4, 2005
          That's a very beautiful poem. Straightforward and unique. With a very creative impact act the end..

          "Ms. Jackson" <trinimerican20743@...> wrote:

          Hello all.  This is my very first time submitting
          poetry and I would love to know what you all think
          about it.  Thanks for allowing me to share my words.

          Peace & Grace,
          Jasmin




          Poem Cry

          I love you.
          I blew it
          So you threw it.
          I love you
          I’m sorry.
          I love you
          You left me…
          You hate me?
          I love you
          Forgive me!
          You promised
          You loved me
          You loved me!
          Still, you left me.

          I love you.
          I need you.
          I breathe you.
          I messed up –
          I know.
          I love you!
          You and me - right
          You and me – wrong
          So what now?
          You and me – no more
          I’ll be fine.
          You’ll be good, I’m sure.
          You said…no we said, goodbye
          Please! No! Why!
          …I just had to make this poem cry


          -Jasmin


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        • AVO Communications,Inc
          I m sorry Ms. Jackson...But I am for real!!! Whoa!!! I wish my first peace was half this powerful! Keep it up... Marc ...
          Message 4 of 10 , Aug 4, 2005
            I'm sorry Ms. Jackson...But I am for real!!!
            Whoa!!!
            I wish my first peace was half this powerful!

            Keep it up...

            Marc

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            > Hello all.  This is my very first time submitting<BR>
            > poetry and I would love to know what you all think<BR>
            > about it.  Thanks for allowing me to share my words.<BR>
            > <BR>
            > Peace & Grace,<BR>
            > Jasmin<BR>
            > <BR>
            > <BR>
            > <BR>
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            > Poem Cry<BR>
            > <BR>
            > I love you.<BR>
            > I blew it<BR>
            > So you threw it.<BR>
            > I love you<BR>
            > I’m sorry.<BR>
            > I love you<BR>
            > You left me…<BR>
            > You hate me?<BR>
            > I love you<BR>
            > Forgive me!<BR>
            > You promised<BR>
            > You loved me<BR>
            > You loved me!<BR>
            > Still, you left me.<BR>
            > <BR>
            > I love you.<BR>
            > I need you.<BR>
            > I breathe you.<BR>
            > I messed up – <BR>
            > I know.<BR>
            > I love you!<BR>
            > You and me - right<BR>
            > You and me – wrong<BR>
            > So what now?<BR>
            > You and me – no more<BR>
            > I’ll be fine.<BR>
            > You’ll be good, I’m sure.<BR>
            > You said…no we said, goodbye<BR>
            > Please! No! Why!<BR>
            > …I just had to make this poem cry<BR>
            > <BR>
            > <BR>
            > -Jasmin<BR>
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          • Rik Cole
            I like ur poem, and I will be looking forward to seeing more of ur works. ... _________________________________________________________________ Is your PC
            Message 5 of 10 , Aug 6, 2005
              I like ur poem, and I will be looking forward to seeing more of ur works.

              >From: "Ms. Jackson" <trinimerican20743@...>
              >Reply-To: illpoets@yahoogroups.com
              >To: illpoets@yahoogroups.com
              >Subject: [illpoets] Poem Cry
              >Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2005 10:56:38 -0700 (PDT)
              >
              >
              >Hello all. This is my very first time submitting
              >poetry and I would love to know what you all think
              >about it. Thanks for allowing me to share my words.
              >
              >Peace & Grace,
              >Jasmin
              >
              >
              >
              >
              >Poem Cry
              >
              >I love you.
              >I blew it
              >So you threw it.
              >I love you
              >I�m sorry.
              >I love you
              >You left me�
              >You hate me?
              >I love you
              >Forgive me!
              >You promised
              >You loved me
              >You loved me!
              >Still, you left me.
              >
              >I love you.
              >I need you.
              >I breathe you.
              >I messed up �
              >I know.
              >I love you!
              >You and me - right
              >You and me � wrong
              >So what now?
              >You and me � no more
              >I�ll be fine.
              >You�ll be good, I�m sure.
              >You said�no we said, goodbye
              >Please! No! Why!
              >�I just had to make this poem cry
              >
              >
              >-Jasmin
              >
              >
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            • Alicia Howard
              Jasmin... This is hot! Female Jigga version.... Ms. Jackson wrote: Hello all. This is my very first time submitting poetry and
              Message 6 of 10 , Aug 8, 2005
                Jasmin...
                 
                This is hot! Female Jigga version....
                 

                "Ms. Jackson" <trinimerican20743@...> wrote:

                Hello all.  This is my very first time submitting
                poetry and I would love to know what you all think
                about it.  Thanks for allowing me to share my words.

                Peace & Grace,
                Jasmin




                Poem Cry

                I love you.
                I blew it
                So you threw it.
                I love you
                I’m sorry.
                I love you
                You left me…
                You hate me?
                I love you
                Forgive me!
                You promised
                You loved me
                You loved me!
                Still, you left me.

                I love you.
                I need you.
                I breathe you.
                I messed up –
                I know.
                I love you!
                You and me - right
                You and me – wrong
                So what now?
                You and me – no more
                I’ll be fine.
                You’ll be good, I’m sure.
                You said…no we said, goodbye
                Please! No! Why!
                …I just had to make this poem cry


                -Jasmin


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              • Nik Joyner
                Sup Group? Tomorrow(08/09) is my 29th birthday and I believe that in celebrating my own life I must celebrate all that influences it. I must celebrate all
                Message 7 of 10 , Aug 8, 2005
                  'Sup Group?  Tomorrow(08/09) is my 29th birthday and I believe that in celebrating my own life I must celebrate all that influences it.  I must celebrate all that touch my life.  You all will be a part of that celebration.  
                  I just want to say thank you to all of you for sharing your words and encouraging me to write.  Enjoy life and please find at least one reason to smile each day.--nik

                  Alicia Howard <dalispittinonmic1@...> wrote:
                  Jasmin...
                   
                  This is hot! Female Jigga version....
                   

                  "Ms. Jackson" <trinimerican20743@...> wrote:

                  Hello all.  This is my very first time submitting
                  poetry and I would love to know what you all think
                  about it.  Thanks for allowing me to share my words.

                  Peace & Grace,
                  Jasmin




                  Poem Cry

                  I love you.
                  I blew it
                  So you threw it.
                  I love you
                  I’m sorry.
                  I love you
                  You left me…
                  You hate me?
                  I love you
                  Forgive me!
                  You promised
                  You loved me
                  You loved me!
                  Still, you left me.

                  I love you.
                  I need you.
                  I breathe you.
                  I messed up –
                  I know.
                  I love you!
                  You and me - right
                  You and me – wrong
                  So what now?
                  You and me – no more
                  I’ll be fine.
                  You’ll be good, I’m sure.
                  You said…no we said, goodbye
                  Please! No! Why!
                  …I just had to make this poem cry


                  -Jasmin


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                • talk2kienic@cs.com
                  Happy birthday Nik! Peace Nichole
                  Message 8 of 10 , Aug 9, 2005
                    Happy birthday Nik!

                    Peace
                    Nichole
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                    Don't let People, Problems & the Pain of your Past -
                    Pause your Present, Punish your Person, Prison your Potential, & Paralyze your Progress.
                  • Brandis Vaughn
                    It was cool. Straight to the point and I really felt it. ... _________________________________________________________________ On the road to retirement? Check
                    Message 9 of 10 , Aug 11, 2005
                      It was cool. Straight to the point and I really felt it.

                      >From: Alicia Howard <dalispittinonmic1@...>
                      >Reply-To: illpoets@yahoogroups.com
                      >To: illpoets@yahoogroups.com
                      >Subject: Re: [illpoets] Poem Cry
                      >Date: Mon, 8 Aug 2005 13:23:37 -0700 (PDT)
                      >
                      >Jasmin...
                      >
                      >This is hot! Female Jigga version....
                      >
                      >
                      >"Ms. Jackson" <trinimerican20743@...> wrote:
                      >
                      >Hello all. This is my very first time submitting
                      >poetry and I would love to know what you all think
                      >about it. Thanks for allowing me to share my words.
                      >
                      >Peace & Grace,
                      >Jasmin
                      >
                      >
                      >
                      >
                      >Poem Cry
                      >
                      >I love you.
                      >I blew it
                      >So you threw it.
                      >I love you
                      >I�m sorry.
                      >I love you
                      >You left me�
                      >You hate me?
                      >I love you
                      >Forgive me!
                      >You promised
                      >You loved me
                      >You loved me!
                      >Still, you left me.
                      >
                      >I love you.
                      >I need you.
                      >I breathe you.
                      >I messed up �
                      >I know.
                      >I love you!
                      >You and me - right
                      >You and me � wrong
                      >So what now?
                      >You and me � no more
                      >I�ll be fine.
                      >You�ll be good, I�m sure.
                      >You said�no we said, goodbye
                      >Please! No! Why!
                      >�I just had to make this poem cry
                      >
                      >
                      >-Jasmin
                      >
                      >
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