[hreg] Re: Condensed HREG Mission Statement
- I propose we insert one word >To< at the beginning of
the mission statement. When I saw the TXSES statement
it confirmed to me that it reads better that way.
--- JClem412@... wrote:
> I have been out of town and preoccupied for over 10
> days and wish to condense
> the Mission Statement as follows:
> Remove "The purpose of HREG shall be to"
> Remove "This shall be accomplished"
> Change "shall serve" to "serves"
> Change "seek" to "seeks"
> Remove the [2nd] "public and government"
> Change "of its purpose" to "of the infinite power of
> renewable energy."
> This way, the Mission Statement and Purpose
> statements can co-exist without
> duplication, and the Mission Statement can be placed
> in many different
> mediums without changing. It is shorter by 11
> words. SO, in full, the
> Mission Statement:
> "Further the development of renewable energy and
> related arts, sciences and
> technologies with concern for the ecological,
> social, and economic fabric of
> our community and state. Through exchange of ideas
> and information by means
> of meetings, publications and public displays, HREG
> serves to inform the
> public, institutional and governmental bodies and
> seeks to raise the level of
> awareness of the infinite power of renewable
> Please consider the foregoing update and adopt the
> statement, allowing use in
> the upcoming flyer I am currently drafting. The
> original statement was
> clear, accurate, and easy to follow, ie,
> well-written, but was tending to be
> long. I hope this update is useful. Thank you.
> Jonathan A. Clemens
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