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Re: [Hammock Camping] pome

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  • Moz
    ... My offering fulfilled most of the traditional requirements, not just the syllable pattern, while also mentioning hammocks. Would you accept a sonnet of 9
    Message 1 of 6 , Aug 4, 2005
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      dclark52001 said:
      >> Oi, no hammock mention!
      > alternative reply: only 17 carefully crafted syllables in the
      > oriental style, and still somebody bloody moans!

      My offering fulfilled most of the traditional requirements, not just
      the syllable pattern, while also mentioning hammocks. Would you accept
      a sonnet of 9 lines? A tradtitional series of rhyming couplets with no
      rhyme?


      I find just two trees
      shedding leaves as the sun sets
      hammock goes between

      swinging in comfort
      as the winter rain falls down
      not for me the ground

      Moz



      Here are some baiku that I've written:

      smiling schadenfruede
      the parking warden works hard
      but ignores my bike

      in hot summer time
      cool morning ride in to work
      not stuck in traffic

      more reason to ride
      pedal powered haste makes sweat
      not a heart attack

      tight bum on fast bike
      recumbents see nicer things
      than people in cars
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