Re: [Fantasy Fiction Dungeon] (unknown)
- stuck up and snob are usually the same, so it's redundant, and
critical is misspelled, of course. you're telling and not showing.
This is a classic example of that. Is there anyway to write it
without telling that he's a stuck up snob?
"His elitism shown like a beacon, is nose turned up so far in the air
that a person could see the empty space where his brain should have
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "Marc Vun Kannon"
> >This is just an excerpt, but what is your opinion on this?would never read.
> He struck me as the sort of stuck up snob whose crtical articles I
>by Echelon Press, now available in trade paperback!
> Marc Vun Kannon
> The Flame in the Bowl 1: Unbinding the Stone, released August 2002
> 'Chasing His Own Tale', in Wyrd Wravings, forthcoming from EchelonPress.
> And for those of you who prefer yours in a kilt:
> Wise, witty, and wonderful stories live and breathe (heavily) at
>I've waited too long for him to get off his duffer andI thought the second was better than the first, story-wise, but hideously overwritten.
>write this series again.
>I'd rather see another Knight of the Word book.
>Or Terry Brooks writing a new Landover novel and getting away from
>these regurgitated Shannara books he's been cranking out the last 4
Marc Vun Kannon
Unbinding the Stone--making lemonade from fantasy lemons!
'Chasing His Own Tale'--Don't mess with the Damsel in Distress!