- My hubsband gave me the idea for the story. By leaving a screwdriver
on the bathroom floor after repairing the toliet. Then he read it
and told me that is was a good start. He hardly ever says bad
things about the style until I am done with a story and then he
points out the spelling and other errors. Then there are the times
he does say, I don't think that is going to work.
I might be able to continue it soon.
--- In email@example.com, "Yvette"
> Wow... Interesting Marcie! Was he dreaming the first part about
> Mom's hand and his brother? You might have to continue thewhere
> story... :)
> --- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "mouseymouseim"
> <mouseymouseim@> wrote:
> > He looked down into the cotton lined box at the beautiful well
> > for left hand of his mother. He wondered what her thoughts
> > when it was cut off, and why she had to die so violently. Theor
> > looked like it was just recently removed from a freezer package
> > dry ice freezer; it showed no signs of any age other then the
> > forty when it was removed, for his mother had been gone for
> > five years. As he took a step closer he felt a tug at his chestone
> > legs. He looked down and saw that he was being tied up by the
> > person he trusted all his life, his step-brother and a verylarge
> > black tail.temper.
> > "Why are you doing this? And what is with the tail?"
> > "Meet my friend, Shane. Watch out he can get a little testy,
> > especially when he is drinking. Plus, he has such a hot
> > hate to see you burned before I have all my fun."
> > "Ok, so I ask again, why are you doing this? How did you get
> > hand?"hurt
> > "Because I can, your brother and you had no idea how much it
> > to see her go thru this everyday? She worked at a greasy spoon
> > he left us in the dust, never to return. Did you see what it
> > doing to her pretty hands?"after
> > "Her hands?"
> > "You have no idea how badly she tried to keep us all afloat
> > left. She cried at night and then her hands began to get
> > I saw her drop plates and food when her hands would quit
> > hated it.
> > "So what you cut them off or just killed her?"
> > "Yeah, I guess you could say I did? Do you want to know how,
> > have a bigger secret for you now. One you would ever forget as
> > as you live."
> > "What are you talking about?"
> > "At this precise moment, your brother is dying the way your
> > did all those years ago when I killed mom. She was in theshower
> > washing up and I made him watch as I tortured her and killedher.
> > Right now your brother is suffered the same fate with his prettywhat
> > wife."
> > "Can I ask why?"
> > "He figured it out. He knew what happened or thought he knew
> > happened those years ago. Maybe it was those damn nightmares ofremembered
> > again that m was telling me about."
> > "So you are killing them slowly or fast just because he
> > what happened twenty five years ago?"to
> > "Oh, yeah! And your next, see. You remembered too, you snotty
> > little brat. Well, I have to go and finish off your brother and
> > wife, sleep well."
> > "Sleep well, hell, let me out of this." He started kicking but
> > no avail. The tail would not let go. Then he felt it a tinyprick
> > the back of his nick and then he was out cold.
> > He woke up later staring at the floor and a screwdriver that was
> > under the sink on the floor. Was it real or was it all in his
> > head. He felt his arms and legs and realized he could move
> > He moved towards the door but found he was still attached tosuit
> > He turned his head around expecting just a guy with a rubber
> > on, but what he saw was worse. What looked like something outof
> > fairy tails was sitting down on his bathroom floor lookingbored.
> > He was bright red in the face and the scales turned variousshades
> > of green and blue when he breathed. A real live dragon wassitting
> > in his house. He tried to move agian, hoping that the dragon wasfrom
> > asleep. He made it three steps before the fire ball came out
> > behind him.