Re: one final proofread?
- thank you.
--- In email@example.com, mach <machhezan@g...> wrote:
> spinster core wrote:
> > I am just wondering if either is more correct or if they are just
> > different modes.
> The first link wouldn't lead me anywhere, but the second has lead
me to two
> lines the first of which corresponds to the sentence you want to
> transcribed. It's in the King's Letter (Third Version) tehtar mode
> Sindarin. I'd change the úre in _law_ to vala, and I wouldn't put
the _i_ in
> _i reviar_ on a short carrier, but on the following rómen.
> I don't know what the second line is supposed to read. It might be
> i ranya ilken_; or perhaps _lá mpannwa i ranya ilquen_. I don't
> about Elvish words in order to translate it so I could tell which
> correct. It's definitly not the sentence you want to have