Very few corrections.
of: The extended stem ampa, just like in the tehta mode.
for: You used ampa instead of formen : 'vor'. I'm assuming it's a typo.
thought: 'ou' should be written as anna + following 'w' tehta. (Cf.
vilya + following 'w' tehta in the spelling of 'daughters'.)
they: 'ey' should be yanta plus double dots.
avoid: 'oi' should be written as anna + double dots. (Cf. the use of
double dots in spellings of 'Baranduin', 'eighth' and 'Daisy'.)
(The following 'w' tehta is used as both 'u' and 'w' as a second element
of a vocalic digraph. Similarly, double dots are used as both 'i' and
'y' as the second element of a vocalic digraph.)
The rest is exactly right.
Cuio mae, Danny.