Re: [elfscript] The second Tengwar Challenge is up
- On 8/16/03 11:14 AM, "DDanielA@..." <DDanielA@...> wrote:
> My suggestions on your text:I got it right! Excellent!
> 'years': I would've used a short carrier rather than long (cf. 'dear'
> in the Brogan Christmas Greeting).
> 'disappointed': Fine as is.
> 'by' : Attested twice on the LotR title page as umbar - long carrier +I should have done it this way. I even made note of it, but it slipped my
> chevron tehta. Go with attested examples.
mind when I was writing the quote out.
> 'sail', 'Twain' : I would use anna + three dots for 'ai' and 'ay'.Similar to how I wrote "away"?
> 'explore': óre instead of rómen.Another obvious mistake I missed.
> 'dream': Again, short carrier. Judging from BCG and the Title PageI debated over use of the single under-dot or not. My first version had it,
> Inscription, the long carrier seems to be rarely used in English tehta
> modes, even where it would seem likely.
> 'discover': Probably fine, but I would've used the single under-dot for
> the e = schwa.
but I figured the 'e' sound was strong enough to warrant the e-tehta.
>Excellent! I'm learning a LOT by doing this and getting all the great
> All in all, very readable.
feedback from everyone. Who knows? Maybe my writing will be correct within
a couple more challenges?