Re: girls night out and linda's second job
- Eiregirlforever, I want to thank you for your imput. To be honest with
you, I agree. I didn't do Linda's Second Job justice. I am therefore
removing the story from the contest. I'm not deleting it for good.
I'm just removing it for an ambush makeover. (Forgive the pun.) I am
going to rewrite it, making Becker a little more cynical. And just for
you, I'm adding Bob. You know, the guy who refers to himself as Bob.
Kind of reminds me of a Presidential Candidate named Bob. I wonder if
that was the writer's way of taking a jab at the Candidate? I don't
know if I will repost Linda's Second Job as a contest story, since I
was advised that too many stories can split the number of votes, but I
will repost it here in this group.
--- In email@example.com, "eiregirlforever"
> I have to say I loved Girls night out. Linda's second job left a
> little to be desired. Becker wasn't cynical enough for me. Plus it
> just felt like something was missing, maybe it was the character of
> Bob. Eh, oh well, good job anyways.