6420Zurich City Design
- Nov 9, 2003Slide 1: OK
4: OK - good stair detailing; you may want to re-take
the picture, with the stair in light
5: OK - what's that with polygon building in the
6: Off-centered; what were you trying to photograph?
10: OK - too bad that Zurich officials couldn't have
commissioned a more tasteful "ganzer platz" sign
12: OK - good job showing the slope, with the steps
14: OK - 2nd time I've seen a "Perosa" sign.
16: Could you edit out the woman on the right? I
think her head was turning right when the camera took
the picture - her face looks smeared and/or in bad
17: OK - lovely, except for the graffiti
19: Retake; it looks like you were photographing the
couple's backs. It also appears that your shadow made
it into the picture.
21: OK - the graffiti really stands out in this place
24: OK - Oooooooh
26: OK - provided that you photographed that car for a
reason, otherwise it looks like an ad for whatever-
Overall: 24/27 OK. It would be neat if you could show
where in the city this place was. Maybe a reference
map at the bottom of the screen, below the main text.