Re: [betterbayview] URGENT community action required - Mendell Plaza [1 Attachment]
- Dan,I'm willing to have my name affixed to the letter, but only if the grammatical errors noted (edited version attached) are corrected. The most common one is the use of quotations. The English version of the rule is used in the original rather than the American, for no good reason. In American usage, single quotes are only used in quotes within quotes, and commas and periods appear within quotation marks except for a few rare extenuating circumstances. I also corrected a few commas and an "a / an" error.Thanks!Jim Hunger900 Mendell St.
From: Dan Dodt <dodt@...>
Sent: Thu, February 16, 2012 11:04:19 AM
Subject: [betterbayview] URGENT community action required - Mendell Plaza [1 Attachment]Dear Friends and Colleagues,Will you add your name and address (or name only) to the attached letter? Your attention to this item is URGENTLY requested. Please note that your organization, if NOT yet approved, appears with a question mark. We;ve noted your group as a leadership entity in Bayview, but will delete your organization from the final version if not approved. We can include your name as connected to your organization, or individually, or not at all.btw, if you note a glaring grammatical error, please let me know.This item will be hand delivered to City Hall today at 5:00pm.thank you,dan
- Only today I heard of the recent violence at Mendell Plaza. I urge everyone to write to, and call, the supervisor, the police chief, the mayor, the police captain, and anyone in power who will listen and take a stand. Let them know you expect help and make any suggestion you feel comfortable with. We can all agree, everyone is hurt by the violence at the plaza.Matt
- There is a workshop coming up at the BVOP next week,Sup. Cohen and Capt. Chignell will be leading it,lert's ALL go and ask for a safer Bayview!
- Diego,Thanks for adding your name to the Mendell Plaza letter.DanOn Feb 17, 2012, at 4:52 PM, Diego Castellani wrote:
There is a workshop coming up at the BVOP next week,Sup. Cohen and Capt. Chignell will be leading it,lert's ALL go and ask for a safer Bayview!