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Re: EDIT - IR - Platypus Sprinter 25 L Daypack - Alex Legg

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  • Bob
    Hi Alex, Still missed one... ... Please correct. Thanks so much, Bob
    Message 1 of 2 , Sep 1, 2013
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      Hi Alex,

      Still missed one...

      > *** Measured Weight: 2.10 oz (0.9kg)
      > EDIT: needs a space after 0.9: (0.9 kg)


      Please correct. Thanks so much,
      Bob




      On Sep 1, 2013, at 8:34 AM, alexander legg wrote:

      > Hi Bob,
      >
      > Thank you for catching all these additional edits! I have made corrections and uploaded to the BGT site
      > --------------------------------------------
      > On Tue, 8/27/13, Bob <rscreative@...> wrote:
      >
      > Subject: EDIT - IR - Platypus Sprinter 25 L Daypack - Alex Legg
      > To: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      > Cc: "alex" <alexlegg2@...>
      > Date: Tuesday, August 27, 2013, 6:33 AM
      >
      > Hi Alex,
      > I am the new test monitor for the Cascade Designs
      > Platypus Sprinter 25 L Daypack.
      > After a review of your report there were several
      > additional edits found in your report.
      > Please make the edits and repost here for
      > review.
      > Thanks so much for your help with
      > this,
      > Bob
      >
      >
      >
      >
      >
      > *** I hike on
      > average 4 m (6 km) daily from my back door and also enjoy
      > trips up to 5 days in the
      > backcountry.
      > EDIT: the
      > abbreviation for miles is “mi” not “m” as that is
      > for meters.
      >
      > *** Product
      > Information and Specifications:
      > EDIT:
      > You are missing listed volume, the reservoir size, and the
      > size and color options available.
      >
      >
      > *** Measured
      > Weight: 2.10 oz (.9kg)
      > EDIT:
      > needs a 0 plus a space at: (0.9 kg)
      >
      >
      > *** Rummaging
      > through the different pockets and straps really fed my gear
      > head addiction.
      > EDIT:
      > gear-head, or gearhead (one word)
      >
      >
      > *** The
      > platypus logo is printed top and center on the
      > pack,
      > EDIT:
      > Platypus (proper noun as it is the company name)
      >
      >
      > ***It
      > looks like it could be a decent sitting pad, or maybe a
      > plate, or a fan, or a dog dish, or a cutting board, or even
      > a frisbee.
      > EDIT:
      > Frisbee needs a cap too.
      >
      >
      > The
      > day after receiving the Platypus pack I was so excited that
      > I quickly planned a 12 mi (19km)
      > EDIT:
      > needs a space at km
      >
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