Re: EDIT - IR - Platypus Sprinter 25 L Daypack - Alex Legg
- Hi Alex,
Still missed one...
> *** Measured Weight: 2.10 oz (0.9kg)Please correct. Thanks so much,
> EDIT: needs a space after 0.9: (0.9 kg)
On Sep 1, 2013, at 8:34 AM, alexander legg wrote:
> Hi Bob,
> Thank you for catching all these additional edits! I have made corrections and uploaded to the BGT site
> On Tue, 8/27/13, Bob <rscreative@...> wrote:
> Subject: EDIT - IR - Platypus Sprinter 25 L Daypack - Alex Legg
> To: firstname.lastname@example.org
> Cc: "alex" <alexlegg2@...>
> Date: Tuesday, August 27, 2013, 6:33 AM
> Hi Alex,
> I am the new test monitor for the Cascade Designs
> Platypus Sprinter 25 L Daypack.
> After a review of your report there were several
> additional edits found in your report.
> Please make the edits and repost here for
> Thanks so much for your help with
> *** I hike on
> average 4 m (6 km) daily from my back door and also enjoy
> trips up to 5 days in the
> EDIT: the
> abbreviation for miles is “mi” not “m” as that is
> for meters.
> *** Product
> Information and Specifications:
> You are missing listed volume, the reservoir size, and the
> size and color options available.
> *** Measured
> Weight: 2.10 oz (.9kg)
> needs a 0 plus a space at: (0.9 kg)
> *** Rummaging
> through the different pockets and straps really fed my gear
> head addiction.
> gear-head, or gearhead (one word)
> *** The
> platypus logo is printed top and center on the
> Platypus (proper noun as it is the company name)
> looks like it could be a decent sitting pad, or maybe a
> plate, or a fan, or a dog dish, or a cutting board, or even
> a frisbee.
> Frisbee needs a cap too.
> day after receiving the Platypus pack I was so excited that
> I quickly planned a 12 mi (19km)
> needs a space at km