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Re: EDIT/Approval - IR - Gregory Contour Backpack - Mark Thompson

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  • Mark Thompson
    Hi Mike, Good to be working with you again! Thanks for your edits.  I have made the changes, deleted the test file(s) and uploaded the corrected document into
    Message 1 of 1 , Aug 16, 2013
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      Hi Mike,
      Good to be working with you again!

      Thanks for your edits.  I have made the changes, deleted the test file(s) and uploaded the corrected document into the proper folder.

      "See" you in two

      Best,
      Mark



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      From: Mike Mosack <mosack@...>
      To: Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...>; Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...>
      Sent: Friday, August 16, 2013 12:24 AM
      Subject: EDIT/Approval - IR - Gregory Contour Backpack - Mark Thompson



      Hi again Mark,
      Nice to "see" you again.
      I apologize for the lateness
      of your edits. Here they are in the usual format of -
      EDIT - must
      change
      edit - My recommended change if you agree
      comment - just
      that

      I found a couple. Nice report. I like your photos. Go ahead and
      upload once you've dealt with them and please remember to delete your test
      version.

      "- A hydration sleeve (a feature that is vital for me as I drink
      a considerable amount of water on the trail) that is externally
      accesible"
      EDIT Spelling of accessible

      "Gregory Mountain Products
      have long boasted of their dedication to superior suspension systems, and the
      Contour looks to be keeping pace. The Contour appears to be keeping with this
      long standing tradition."
      Comment/edit It appears to me that the second
      sentence is unnecessary as you already said basically the same thing in the
      first sentence. The edit is that I think long-standing needs a
      hyphen

      Comment I appreciate the text within the image pointing to the
      specific features.

      "This looks like another awesome product from Gregory!
      I am especially entusiastic about Gregory Mountain Products design team's focus
      on usability while keeping the pack's weight in check!"
      EDIT Spelling of
      enthusiastic

      So that's all I found.
      See you in two.
      Mike

      ---
      In mailto:backpackgeartesters%40yahoogroups.com,
      Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...> wrote:
      >
      > Hi,
      > For
      your editing pleasure, please find my IR below and at: http://tinyurl.com/mb8olxz
      >
      > Climb On!
      > Mark
      >
      >
      > GREGORY CONTOUR 60
      BACKPACK




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