Re: EDIT/Approval - IR - Gregory Contour Backpack - Mark Thompson
- Hi Mike,
Good to be working with you again!
Thanks for your edits. I have made the changes, deleted the test file(s) and uploaded the corrected document into the proper folder.
"See" you in two
From: Mike Mosack <mosack@...>
To: Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...>; Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...>
Sent: Friday, August 16, 2013 12:24 AM
Subject: EDIT/Approval - IR - Gregory Contour Backpack - Mark Thompson
Hi again Mark,
Nice to "see" you again.
I apologize for the lateness
of your edits. Here they are in the usual format of -
EDIT - must
edit - My recommended change if you agree
comment - just
I found a couple. Nice report. I like your photos. Go ahead and
upload once you've dealt with them and please remember to delete your test
"- A hydration sleeve (a feature that is vital for me as I drink
a considerable amount of water on the trail) that is externally
EDIT Spelling of accessible
"Gregory Mountain Products
have long boasted of their dedication to superior suspension systems, and the
Contour looks to be keeping pace. The Contour appears to be keeping with this
long standing tradition."
Comment/edit It appears to me that the second
sentence is unnecessary as you already said basically the same thing in the
first sentence. The edit is that I think long-standing needs a
Comment I appreciate the text within the image pointing to the
"This looks like another awesome product from Gregory!
I am especially entusiastic about Gregory Mountain Products design team's focus
on usability while keeping the pack's weight in check!"
EDIT Spelling of
So that's all I found.
See you in two.
Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...> wrote:
>your editing pleasure, please find my IR below and at: http://tinyurl.com/mb8olxz
> Climb On!
> GREGORY CONTOUR 60
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