RE: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT - IR: Carhartt Men's Henley T-Shirt - John Waters
Thanks for your editing. I've made the corrections and uploaded the file
after deleting the test file. See you in a couple of months.
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Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT - IR: Carhartt Men's Henley T-Shirt -
Thanks for your IR. The HTML looks good and I've only a couple of edits for
you, which follow the standard format. Once the edits are made, you're good
The neckline is "tagless" and the only tag is the care insturctions tag on
the t-shirt is quite low on the left side seam.
EDIT: Please correct the spelling of 'instructions'.
Constructed of a 65% cotton/35% polyester plaited jersey knit, Carhartt says
its Force "wicks away sweat throughout a hot day for comfort, while its
stain-release finish helps it comes clean with every wash with Stain Breaker
EDIT: Please delete the 's' on 'comes' to make it singular and fit the
Edit: To avoid repetition in proximity, may I suggest deleting the first
'with' which would not detract from the context.
Pretty simple. I'm sure my wife can handle it!
Comment: I hope your health insurance is paid up and the bruising is
That's all I've got for you John. Hope you enjoy the testing and see you in
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