RE: [backpackgeartesters] Fwd: Edit: Carhartt Force Henley T-Shirt - Mike Mosack
- Thanks, Kerri!
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> From: Kerri Larkin <kerrilarkin@... <mailto:kerrilarkin%40yahoo.com>are beautifully sharp and clear. Please go ahead and upload once the edits
> Subject: Edit: Carhartt Force Henley T-Shirt - Mike Mosack
> Date: 9 July 2013 9:46:39 AM AEST
> To: Mike Mosack <mosack@... <mailto:mosack%40earthlink.net> >
> Hi Mike,
> Thanks for this nicely presented IR. The HTML looks great and the photos
are made. I've only got a couple of edits for you, which follow the standard
> EDIT: must be changedthere's 2XL, but I can't see the 'G' and wonder if it refers to the colour?
> Edit: suggested change
> Comment: comment only
> Measured Weight: 9.45 oz (268 g) for size 2XLG
> Tested item: Size 2XLG regular, color is Moss Green.
> I wear an extra-extra large regular fit (2XLG)
> Comment/Edit: I can't find any reference to 2XLG on the website. Certainly
Obviously, I don't have the hang-tags that you do, so please keep as is if
that's correct, otherwise perhaps delete the 'G'?
>active lifestyle, which according to the manufacturer states it is not
> I will be curious to see how a work shirt by design will work for an
>you could say, 'which the manufacturer states it is not intended for',
> EDIT: please delete 'states' for clarity of the sentence. Alternatively,
although I'm guessing Carhartt doesn't say 'you can't use it for this' other
than in that marketing blurb about it being made for workers not athletes.
>months for my Field Report." I'm not certain if this is a requirement of
> Comment: There's no sentence saying something like, "Check back in two
reports, or a generally accepted convention which can be ignored. I'm sure
our Senior Moderator will let us know if it must be included or if it's just
nice to add it.
>and I'll see you in a couple of months.
> That's all I've got for you Mike! Enjoy testing this nice looking shirt
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> Kind Regards,
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