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RE: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: FR Helly Hansen - H2 Flow Jacket - Ed Morse

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  • Edwin Morse
    Kathy, All fixed, new HTML uploaded and old deleted from Tests folder. Thanks for the edits. Ed _____ From: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
    Message 1 of 2 , Jul 10, 2013
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      Kathy,
      All fixed, new HTML uploaded and old deleted from Tests folder.

      Thanks for the edits.

      Ed

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      From: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      [mailto:backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Kathy Waters
      Sent: Tuesday, July 09, 2013 10:24 AM
      To: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      Cc: Edwin Morse
      Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: FR Helly Hansen - H2 Flow Jacket - Ed
      Morse




      Ed,

      Great report! Loved your pictures as well! I've just a few very minor
      edits and then you are good to delete your test file and upload. See you in
      a couple of months.

      Kathy

      Edit: I think you need a paragraph break just before you list your
      backpacking trips. Actually, I suggest adding two, one after "weather
      finally realized it was spring." And then after "I've done three backpacking
      trips since receiving the jacket."

      Edit: Ditto the paragraph break just before your "June 4 through June 13"
      trip.

      <<IMAGE GOES HERE. ALT TEXT = "at Brebvoort Lake CG" IMAGE CAPTION =
      "campsite at Brevoort Lake">>

      EDIT: Correct "Brevoort" in the first instance - ALT TEXT

      The next to last day or our hike we camped at the Rivermouth Campground on
      the Tahquamenon River. I was comfortable wearing just a tee shirt until the
      fog rolled in.

      EDIT: Change to "next-to-last".

      From: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
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      [mailto:backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      <mailto:backpackgeartesters%40yahoogroups.com> ] On Behalf Of Edwin Morse
      Sent: Sunday, July 7, 2013 8:43 AM
      To: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      <mailto:backpackgeartesters%40yahoogroups.com>
      Cc: kathy@... <mailto:kathy%40bysky.com>
      Subject: [backpackgeartesters] FR - Helly Hansen - H2 Flow Jacket - Ed Morse

      Kathy,
      Below is the text version of my FR.
      Thanks in advance for the edits. Hope I haven't made it too difficult.

      The full HTML should be found here:
      http://tinyurl.com/lcqfp67

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