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Re: EDIT: [backpackgeartesters] FR - Kindle Cooke - Andrea Murland

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  • ringrat55
    Thanks Nancy. I modified that sentence in my summary slightly, so hopefully that makes more sense. See ya on the next one. Andrea
    Message 1 of 7 , Jun 14, 2013
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      Thanks Nancy. I modified that sentence in my summary slightly, so hopefully that makes more sense. See ya on the next one.
      Andrea

      --- In backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com, Nancy Griffith <bkpkrgirl@...> wrote:
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      > Hi Andrea,
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      > Dang.  I meant to do Theresa's edits first but was reading your report.  So these are YOUR edits.  I'm doing Theresa's now.
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      > Hi Andrea,
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      > Nice report.  This is a very interesting product.  I couldn't find any edits but just had one question.  You seem to indicate that the test with snow wasn't effective but at the end you say that the product worked as described.
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      > Upload away.  I'm looking forward to your next report.
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      > Thanks,
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      > Nancy
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    • Theresa Lawrence
      Thanks Nancy, I ve uploaded the final version, see you in august. Theresa ________________________________ From: Nancy Griffith To:
      Message 2 of 7 , Jun 19, 2013
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        Thanks Nancy, I've uploaded the final version, see you in august.
        Theresa


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        From: Nancy Griffith <bkpkrgirl@...>
        To: "backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com" <backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com>
        Sent: Thursday, June 13, 2013 9:31:18 PM
        Subject: EDIT: [backpackgeartesters] FR - Kindle Cooke - Theresa Lawrence



         
        Hi Theresa,
        Thanks for a very nice report. I'm having fun reading about this unique item.
         
        Here are your edits. Feel free to upload when ready. I'm looking forward to the next set of reports.
         
        Happy trails,
         
        Nancy
         
        <<In
        below freezing temperatures I was able to melt snow and obtain lukewarm water,
        in slightly warmer temperatures above freezing I was able to get a nice hot
        beverage after about 15 minutes.
        Edit: My spell-checker shows the need for a semi-colon (instead of a comma) after 'water'
         
        <<I was
        able to get a hot meal when temperatures were above freezing, I had to wait
        about 15-20 minutes.
        Edit: Same thing here '...freezing; I had...'.  It looks like two independent clauses.
         
        <<The Kindle set is easy enough to pack, I put all the heat
        packs for both in the cook box.
        Edit: Another one...
         
        <<They
        are heavier and take up more space then when they were packed in.
        Edit: 'than' instead of 'then'
         

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