Hi Kurt/ Lori
It's outta there now. Thanks for the link.
Sent from my iPhone
On Feb 11, 2013, at 6:30 AM, Kurt Papke <kwpapke@...> wrote:
> Could an Empowered One please delete:
> for Lori? Thanks! --kurt
> On Sun, Feb 10, 2013 at 10:19 PM, Lori Pontious lori.pontious@...> wrote:
> > I can't upload the edited report - help please?
> > On Jan 30, 2013, at 8:01 AM, Kurt Papke kwpapke@...> wrote:
> >> Hey Lori. As always, EDIT=must, edit=optional, comment= editorial
> >>> Although I have been somewhat rough with it, stuffing it into the trunk of the car under bins and gear, the bag is pretty much in the same condition as when I received it.
> >> edit: this somewhat contradicts your finding of unraveling seams in
> >> the FR. Would it make sense to restate that it is in the same shape
> >> as it was when you concluded the FR or something to that effect?
> >>> Probably the only other frustrating thing about this bag is a minor quibble as it is not the intended use for the feature - but the hood of the bag is where I stuff a pillow or some clothing to cushion my head, and it's so generous that whatever I put there slides out while I'm sleeping.
> >> edit: this is a bit of a run-on sentence, and the "-" punctuation here
> >> might be a little confusing. I'd suggest you rephrase this to
> >> something like "The generous length of the bag is a great feature, but
> >> has an unintended consequence of allowing my pillow to slide up from
> >> underneath my head." Choose your own words, but I'd try and simplify
> >> that sentence a bit to make it easier to parse.
> >> C'est tout! Upload when your edits are complete, and please delete
> >> from the Test folder.
> >> See ya on a future series!
> >> --Kurt
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