Thanks for your edits. My Internet is down right now so I will get I it as soon as possible. Thanks again
--- In email@example.com, "the_fish_guy" wrote:
> Nice report! Just a few items below for your attention, then feel free to upload. Catch you on the LTR!
> I have carried the day pack on many different occasions. There has been lots of
> day hikes, a few backpacking trips, and a number of times when the pack was used
> as a makeshift shopping bag at my local supermarket.
> EDIT: There have been . . .
> I took the pack on 3 trips to the Mt. Baldy Wilderness Area, south of Tucson,
> Arizona. On each trip I covered fro 9 mi to 15 mi (14 km to 24 km) in varying
> conditions of sunny and dry to light and down pouring rain.
> EDIT: On each trip I covered from . . .
> The Temperature ranged from 7 F to 40F (-14 C to 4 C)
> and the conditions left me in the fog and rain the entire time.
> EDIT: temperature (doesn't need to be capitalized)
> I often
> load it with a base layer (1pair pants and 1shirt), . . .
> EDIT: there should be a space after the digit 1 in both cases.
> I was a little bummed when my collapsable water bottle didn't fit securely in
> the small compression straps on the front of the pack.
> EDIT: spelling . . . collapsible
> The lightweight material that constructs this pack is a lot more comfortable
> than I had suspected.
> Comment: This sentence sounds funny to me. You might try "The lightweight material this pack is constructed with is a lot more comfortable than I had expected."