EDIT: FR - Sea to Summit Ultra-Sil Dry Daypack - Gail
Nice report! Below are just a few things for you before your upload. See you for the LTR!
These kind of conditions always make me a little more safety orientated than I already am.
EDIT: These kinds . . .
When I come back to the hut I take out dry socks, shirt, hat, etc as well as sometimes lunch from the pack.
EDIT: etc., (it's an abbreviation, and I think a comma following it sets the clause off a bit better)