Edit: LTR- Black Diamond Mercury 75 - Lyon
- Hi Richard,
Here are a few edits for you. It looks like this makes a good winter pack.
See you down the trail,
*** carrying the picnic lunch for the four of us plus two liters of extra water and children's rain gear and related items.
EDIT: there is an extra space before "items"
*** Without children or picnic paraphenalia my load was much lighter,
*** thanks to a vacuum bottle of hot Acli-Mate Mountain Sports drink
EDIT: no "s" at the end of sport in Mountain Sport Drink
***Again the front zipper to the main pack bagcame in handy,
EDIT: need a space after "bag"
- Thanks, Ray. Revised, uploaded, and Tests folder copy deleted.
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "Ray" <rayestrella@...> wrote:
> Hi Richard,
> Here are a few edits for you. It looks like this makes a good winter pack.
> See you down the trail,