EDIT: IR: GSI Outdoors Glacier Stainless Kettle - Kerri Larkin
- Hi Kerri,
I've been at a conference so a bit delayed, but here are your edits.
HTML looks good!
>EDIT: no need for the comma in this caption
> Described as, "Fire-Proof, Rust-Proof, Scout-Proof" but
> wrapped in protective plastic
>EDIT: has found
> completely if needed. I love that GSI have found an easy solution to the
> perennial problem of burnt hands when using almost any cookware.
>EDIT: stays upright
> The handle stowed and extended for use. It actually stay upright!
> A spout only it's mother could loveEDIT: its
> Squat means no snags in the pack
> There were no instructions included with the kettle, but it really isComment: up at the top you say you will call it the kettle, and in
> obvious how it fits together. The packaging showed some great information on
> the fact that the Glacier is uncoated.
places you call it the Glacier - might want to add that nickname in as
well above, or be consistent with what you have stated you will call
> give me cancer here. Because the kettle is uncoated, GSI says it can beEDIT: scraped, scoured...
> scaped, scoured with sand or thrown in the dishwasher without concern.
> reason for choosing stainless steel is so the kettle can be used with woodEdit: the wording here is a bit off to my "ear" - I'm looking in
> fires and still be easily cleaned. I'll be looking with interest as to how
> that works.
> The box detail also shows the kettle is capable of nesting a 110 gram (3.9
> oz) gas cartridge internally. While that's great, it's probably not a
> feature I will use, and I think I can use the internal volume of the kettle
> more fully than a single gas canister.
particular at the phrasing "capable of nesting" and then the next
sentence just sounds circumlocutory and roundabout. Suggest
simplifying this to something along the lines of "The kettle is big
enough that I can nest a ... I will probably use the kettle for
storing other things, such as my bowl, spork, pack towel, etc. "
>EDIT: don't forget the conversion here.
> For an initial tryout I used the burner of my gas stove to see how long it
> would take to boil 500ml water.
> fingers. I love that! I'm looking forward to trying the kettle on a woodEDIT: Need a space between that and remains.
> fire to see if thatremains true.
See you in a couple of months! Happy boiling.