RE: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: IR - Big Agnes Jack Rabbit SL2 Tent - Brett Haydin
- Thanks for the edits AB. I think I addressed the final edit, but I may have
muddied it up more for you. Anyway, I did upload the file to the BA folder
and deleted the test file. Loving the tent already. Been out in it twice
now, even using the fast fly set up. Can't wait to update ya'll in two
[mailto:firstname.lastname@example.org] On Behalf Of A. Buskov
Sent: Tuesday, May 29, 2012 1:48 PM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: IR - Big Agnes Jack Rabbit SL2 Tent -
Here are your edits. Please follow the standard EDIT, Edit, Comment
convention. Email me if you have questions, remember to delete the test
report, and upload when ready.
>in x C
> Listed Packed Size: 6.5 in x 21 in 16.5 cm x 53 cm) Actual Packed Size: C
EDIT: Missing '(' in Listed packed Size, and what is "C in x C"
> in (X cm x X cm)EDIT: Missing conversion & numerics.
> does not need to be staked down in order to remain standing. The Jackfirst
> Rabbit uses 2 sets of aluminum poles in order to achieve its shape. The
> set of poles is a small one made of two segments that lays across thewidth
EDIT: Believe this should be 'that lies across the'
> which has two arms that extend from each end; sort of likeEdit: you use "set" In a weird way. Innitially you describe '2 sets', but
> this: >-< The poles are manufactured by DAC and are TH72M aluminum that
> snap into plastic hubs.
then you list each pole as its own set. Almost seems like there are 4 poles
in total, instead of 2 (even though 1 is a really long & branching pole).
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