EDIT: IR - Montbell - Tachyon Anorak - Andrei Girenkov
Just a couple items below for your consideration in the standard
EDIT/Edit/Comment format. Once you have addressed these to your
satisfaction, feel free to delete from the test folder and upload to the
> Sewn inside the edge of the hood is a a 9" (23 cm) flexible rod tostiffen the "visor" of the hood. A 10 inch (25 cm) zipper at the neckline
---For consistency, consider using either the quotation mark abbreviation
for inches, the word "inches" spelled out, or the common "in." Your call.
> When walking on level ground I believe this would not be an issue, but ifclimbing uphill and using trekking poles, the gap may be letting wind in.
---Be cautious of projecting here. This may be easy enough to test by
climbing up stairs or something similar. It it generally best to test
something like this before making guesses as to how it might perform.
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