EDIT: IR- Black Diamond Astral 40 Backpack - Gail
- Hi Gail,
I see it is my turn to edit you:-) Your edits are below - enjoy the pack!
Edits follow the usual convention:
EDIT: Must change
Edit: Check it out and consider changing something
Comment: Just that...no change needed
Near the top of that pocket is a hook and stick loop to
hold a hydration bladder.
>> EDIT: hook-and-loop is the normal spelling, but if you can use hook-and-stick loop if you prefer, please hyphenate
features such a tube port and stretch loops on the harness add in
setting up a hydration unit.
>> EDIT: such as a tube...~~~
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